- by HeartlessSinner |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 05/31/2009 |
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- Title: Two Halves
- Artist: HeartlessSinner
- Description: These are two of my OCs (or one OC). The more human-looking one is Dionysus and the one with the mask is Sinister. You can gather from the background a bit of their story, but they are, in essence, the same.
- Date: 05/31/2009
- Tags: halves
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Comments (7 Comments)
- VAMPIREKITTY1261 - 09/12/2009
- SENNA, U SON OF A *B---H* IT LOOKS GREAT!!!!!!! UR NOT HER ART TEACHER!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Senna86 - 06/03/2009
- 3- if you're going to put writing as your background, that is a bad way of doing it, as the further you read the harder it becomes to find which line you're trying to go to. consider putting the text in two columns, one on each side of the character.4- study folds. if you dont know how to properly fold the clothing, the picture usually ends up looking messy and busy and just wrong. i applaud you on your try. the characters have potential, they just need some work.
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- Senna86 - 06/03/2009
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im gonna comment in two parts (one wont fit)
alright. you want constructive... 1-you should refrain from putting your characters in that position. it makes the picture lack depth. especially if they're not looking at you. they're static. 2- they both (especially the one on the left) look uncomfortably stiff. dont be afraid of bending limbs a little. bending the legs a little will give the characters more stability. - Report As Spam
- Synska - 06/02/2009
- its the best oc art ive ever seen in my entire life and i just say that i wish i coudl do taht and i also wish there was a 10 rating cuz ide give it to you
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- HeartlessSinner - 06/01/2009
- -Sighs- Is it so much to ask for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? Let's be honest here. If I cared about if people were 'feelin it', I would simply ask for everyone's opinion on content instead of drawing from my novel. If you must say something, even if it's negative, make it constructive, lest, you look like an a**.
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- Screaming-Squee - 06/01/2009
- You could certainly get somewhere with this. Keep on trying and work on head shape. Excellent shading.
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- Allyn285 - 06/01/2009
- Yeah.....Not really feelin it here
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