- by ninjaclimbs |
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- | Submitted on 05/04/2009 |
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- Title: Saya (rough draft)
- Artist: ninjaclimbs
- Description: This is only a rought draft of a character named saya. I need some advice on this. Yes, I will add in shadings. Yes, I will add in wrinkles and stuff on her pants and coat a little more. But, I feel like I'm missing something, I just don't know what. And when I say give me advice, it's not "THIS SUXS A KID CAN DO BETTER" or that crap, because I'll just delete your comment anyway, so don't waste your time if you have no constructive critcisim.
- Date: 05/04/2009
- Tags: saya rough draft
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Comments (7 Comments)
- NiellaDDC - 05/26/2009
- work on the body figure... but this drawing is nice..
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- pinkbeachbum - 05/08/2009
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detail the weapons a bit more. hehehe, they remind me of fire pokers. LOVE the eyes!
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- Gothic_Michy - 05/08/2009
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its good but chu need 2 work on face expresins a littel more
ok but bsides that its good - Report As Spam
- KLTC - 05/05/2009
- There seems to be too much white space, fill it up. She needs to be a bit more shapely.
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- Queen of Paradoxia - 05/05/2009
- maybe a belt or something along those lines would look good =3 5/5
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- ninjaclimbs - 05/04/2009
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shadow: YEAH! THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT TOO! but i have no idea what to do for the aura and stuff... so ill just wait for other opinions and figure it out in my final draft
sunshine: oh i see. well i was trying to go for "she's angry and dangerous" but ill try going with yours in the final - Report As Spam
