- by xlilwerewulfx |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/25/2009 |
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- Title: Rave Star
- Artist: xlilwerewulfx
- Description: just something i had made for a friend ^_^ its her oc, "star"
- Date: 11/25/2009
- Tags: rave starblackcolorfullvampirerandommom
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Comments (6 Comments)
- brutal2sweetness - 04/24/2010
- I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEE U GOOD WAT EVA IT IS U DOING DONT STOP COZ U DOING IT GOOD
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- Phantom-of_Winter - 11/28/2009
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shading to some things like the star clip on her hair, looks very 2D. As for anatomy, it looks fine but the shoulder to the left looks a little funky to me. In all, great job, be careful of your angling, shading needs to be worked on, and other objects need to be cared for. Keep up the good work. :3 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 11/28/2009
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Wonderful. I like how you color the glow stick (and her eyes). owo
Now for a critique; maybe you should try coloring your pictures a little more smoothly. Perhaps beldning in the shadows and adding the other light forms of that color. You did a great job of that with the stockings, but I believe the pants and the top seems to be lacking that effect. Also becareful of your angle; an example would be the star on her shirt. It looks maybe almost front view when it should be 3/4. Another thing; add - Report As Spam
- btalatas - 11/27/2009
- Wow nice draw i like them i wont your talent biggrin razz
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- sugarsign10 - 11/26/2009
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hehe 1st comment!
TAHTS REALLY CUTEE!!! I REALLY LIKE IT 5/5 - Report As Spam
