- by whisper767 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 01/13/2010 |
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- Title: A raver Girl
- Artist: whisper767
- Description: how is this one please coment me
- Date: 01/13/2010
- Tags: raver girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Miss_Sedation - 01/15/2010
- i see you shy away from drawing arms, along with what everyone else said...she is fairly odd shaped ._. nice try though
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- TheFlightlessGerbil - 01/15/2010
- I think some of the body is off-sized like the waist, and if you wanna make it a big head, it should be a chibi. Not a half-and-half manga thing... But anyway, Im a sucker for big, sparkly eyes on drawings.
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- Taki Star - 01/13/2010
- Good job but a few things are off next time you draw try and make the breasts smaller. When i first started to draw i did the same thing and i also made the head to big. you would be surprised how much better your work would look if you just made the head smaller and the breasts smaller. But good job keep practicing wink
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- p-chan6cutie3 - 01/13/2010
- i like the dress smile
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