- by HotColdFrappucino |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 12/14/2010 |
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- Title: My best buds (irl)
- Artist: HotColdFrappucino
- Description: I apologise if the picture quality isn't that satisfactory. Anyway, the 3 stars represent my best pals who always support me. I'm not sure if you can read the words but they say 'Friends are like stars, shining always' along with their names. The flybeater is our secret emblem XD(Don't ask). Its my first time entering in this arena so any constructive criticism and comments on how I can improve are greatly welcomed.
- Date: 12/14/2010
- Tags: best buds stars
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Taborix - 12/22/2010
- I agree with LiberMortis that you could draw the lines darker so it is easier to see. You also need to make the lines all the same darkness unless it's in the sunlight or the shade. I would add some details to the moon and maybe make the clouds look more 3D. I would also add more details to the wings so you can see more feathers. I would also add some stars in the background to match the moon more. The clouds should be darker so it looks more like night. 5/5.
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- LiberMortis - 12/16/2010
- reference manga to put wisp on the clouds, draw your lines a bit darker, and the hands could be better. I like the general idea on what you were doing your picture about, and good work on the eyes, you perfected folds, hair, wings, and detail and your almost perfect with your proportions ( I suggest working on the head to arms proportion though) and I like the picture overall, you did very well. 5/5 p.s. I love the work on the wings.
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- HotColdFrappucino - 12/14/2010
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I'm not too sure what happened to the shading though it can't show up.
Heres the direct link to the photo.
http://i833.photobucket.com/albums/zz257/RavenSky_049/scan00012.jpg
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