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Please be safe,
Please be strong,
Just know it wont be long,
Till you are here and our arms,
Forever and safe from harm.
- by Emerald_sapphire_121 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/17/2008 |
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- Title: Home
- Artist: Emerald_sapphire_121
- Description: this a poem im going to say everynight for my brother while he is on deployment...
- Date: 08/17/2008
- Tags: home
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ix-LiL DorK IsH-xI - 05/22/2009
- i agree, in poetry but its still realy good.
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- ii-MidnightAngel-ii - 05/14/2009
- its good but kinda sad and kinda happy
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- PoeticWindstorm - 05/02/2009
- its cool....but i think u need to submit it under poetry smile
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- Hanamura Kana - 04/14/2009
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This is really nice. I hope your brother comes home soon. smile
kana - Report As Spam
- Airi_Chan1012 - 04/10/2009
- It makes me feel happy and sad... it good! ^^
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- Ryuichi Akagi - 04/08/2009
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quite sad...
i like it - Report As Spam
- The Bandaged Girl - 02/11/2009
- This should be under poetry, but I like it anyway! ^-^
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