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Please be safe,
Please be strong,
Just know it wont be long,
Till you are here and our arms,
Forever and safe from harm.
- by Emerald_sapphire_121 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/17/2008 |
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- Title: Home
- Artist: Emerald_sapphire_121
- Description: this a poem im going to say everynight for my brother while he is on deployment...
- Date: 08/17/2008
- Tags: home
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Comments (7 Comments)
- GODDNESSES_ARIA - 12/13/2008
- Sucks as a nothing 1/5
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- Mud99 - 12/12/2008
- Yes, it should be under poems, but it is still pretty good. Line 4 could be worded better. 3/5
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- Elden Andel - 12/11/2008
- Everyone says that this sould be in another section, and it should. It should be sent to your brother.
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- xXIceCold_And_DangerousXx - 12/08/2008
- This should be under poetry an lyrics... shouldn't it?
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- Cirkus de la Freek - 12/06/2008
- sweet, but shouldn't be under fiction.
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- BeaniesFTW - 12/05/2008
- short, i suppose is what i should say? not really a fiction story...please copy and paste this to a poem submission. then it would be much better.
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- rebelliousOracle - 12/04/2008
- shouldn't this be under poetry and lyrics?
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