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There is a girl
In my little world
I always think about
She's perfect in near everyway
This I would never doubt
But in comparison to me
I feel so lone inside
For I am just a jester
In the courtroom of her life
A princess and a puaper
These two things could never be
Could such a beauty love a beast
On the inside like me
The daydreams
Never ending still
A constant torment now
For these things show me what could be
Instead of how things are right now
Sometimes they make me lose a grip
On my reality
And drift asleep into a land
With her there right beside me
Why can't I shake this feeling
We could be no more than friends
But my heart aches for her touch
It must have her
Before my story ends
- by Haseo the Adept Terror |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Girl
- Artist: Haseo the Adept Terror
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- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- tomboyunicorn - 07/20/2009
- hey this is pretty cool! And trust me, IT IS POSSIBLE!
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- lexi2197 - 07/17/2009
- Aw this is so romantic, not a lot of guys are like that.
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- HOLLIEHOBBY - 07/12/2009
- luved it!! made me wish i were the girl. lol
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- Dragons Willow - 07/08/2009
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this is my fave part, and the best written, in my opinion: "And drift asleep into a land
With her there right beside me
Why can't I shake this feeling
We could be no more than friends
But my heart aches for her touch
It must have her
Before my story ends "
great!! 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Wolfgurl4 - 06/23/2009
- AMAZING
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- fading_gray - 04/22/2009
- this is wonderful, i truly enjoyed reading it! 5/5
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- ll Music Addiction ll - 04/18/2009
- A depth of feeling is clearing shown here, in others words great. ^^ 5/5 (if I could vote)
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