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I saw him, standing under a lamp post, near my apartment. I glanced at my watch. It was almost midnight. My phone rang. I answered the call. Somebody got the wrong number. It was annoying to get calls like this. I switched off the phone. I did not need disturbance.
I walked into7-eleven. I bought two cokes. I read the time again. It was half past twelve. It began to drizzle. He was still there, standing in the rain, at this late hour. I knew he was waiting for me. Nevermind, he didn’t have to know I was here all the time.
I put my hands into the pockets of my jacket. I took out a cigarette. Then, a lighter. I lit the cigarette. I sucked in a mouthful of smoke. I choked. I didn’t care. I liked the way it helped me forget things that were taking up too much memory space. I continued smoking, enjoying the smoke that came out of my mouth, until I finished the whole packet.
It was two o’clock. The rain never stopped. And, he never moved. Not even a step. I knew he wanted to see me. In fact, I even knew why. He wanted to say sorry. He wanted to apologize for cheating on me. He wanted to apologize for getting together with my best friend, Rita, behind my back, and making her pregnant, with his child. I knew him so well. He too, knew me well enough to understand that I don’t usually accept apologies. I didn’t need his sorries. And, I knew that wasn’t his main purpose. I knew he was going to invite him to his wedding. I saw him hold the invitation card in his hand. He wasn’t really sorry.
Three o’clock. I was getting bored. Watching him stand in the rain was not fun at all. I grabbed the plastic bag containing the cokes. I approached him. Before that, I added heroin into one of the cokes. Heroin was his favourite. I knew he would love it.
“Wanna have a coke?” I handed the can to him, and sat down next to him. I got wet. It was still raining.
“Thanks.” He said. He took out an envelope. He gave it to me. “I’m getting married next month, with Rita.” He said. He finished the whole can, in one go.
“I see.” I told him, tonelessly. I knew I wouldn’t guess wrong. He didn’t mean to apologize. He was getting married. “Congratulations.” I spoke to the floor. He was busy playing with his empty can, but, not for too long.
Twenty minutes past three. He told me he was getting really hot and stuffy. He told me he had a headache. He told me he wanted to go home.
“See you at the wedding.” He tried to smile.
“I don’t need to go.” I spoke to the floor.
He stood up. He sat down on the floor, hard. He stood up, and, sat down, again. I smiled at him.
Four o’clock. He fainted. I knew he wouldn’t hear a word I said. But, all the same, I talked to him.
“You know? I used to be a very happy girl. I had everything I wanted, and was living a comfortable life. But, for you, I gave up almost everything. I left my mom, my dad, my family. I gave up everything I could, for your sake. You and Rita, are all I have left. Now, you made me lose Rita. I cannot lose you anymore. You’re everything I have now. I cannot lose you... I cannot... I cannot...” I started to cry. Nobody saw my tears, it was raining. Plus, who would be here at four o’clock?
Twenty minutes past four. I finally had enough of crying. I wiped away my tears. I laughed. “Now, you’re all mine. All mine! You can’t get away. You’re mine, forever!” I began laughing even louder.
Five o’clock. The rain stopped. So did his heart. I looked at him I stroke his hair. He looked handsome, even with his eyes closed. I stayed by his side, gently touching his face.
Five thirty. I kissed him, fiercely. He did not struggle to get away. I liked the way he remained still as we kissed.
Six o’clock. My lips left his, unwillingly. “I have to go now. But, we’ll meet again, soon. I’ll miss you, honey.” I spoke softly into his ears. I got into my car. I drove away.
Seven thirty. I reached my office. The editor called me to his room. “A twenty-two year old just died on front of 7-eleven. It’s just next to your apartment. He was said to have an overdose of heroin. Why don’t you go over and interview some of the people there, and, write a report for the paper tomorrow? This is going to be big news!” The editor was so excited.
“Yes, of course, I’ll be happy to do that.” I replied, with a smile.
Eight thirty. I reached the scene. I saw the police put his body into a big black plastic bag. I smiled at the plastic bag. “Now, we meet again. You see, I always keep my promises.” I whispered to myself.
- by Fake Silence |
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- | Submitted on 01/15/2009 |
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- Title: A promise
- Artist: Fake Silence
- Description: I wrote this about a week ago, when i changed my smiley face profile to a cool, and unfriendly one. I was feeling a bit down, that time. I'm not sure if the title fits, but, it's almost the best one i've thought of. Comment please, if you rated. I wish to know how to improve. Thanks =)
- Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: promise
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Comments (4 Comments)
- cutepie_cutepie16 - 01/17/2009
- its like telling wats happening every hour. but its still good
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- xXRawr-GirrXx - 01/16/2009
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I'm with tear goddess on how it was dark. I liked it. I wonder what it'd be like to die from an overdose of heroine... Probably end up going to heaven hella high. lol, I'm random, and rambling...
I liked it... 5/5
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- tear goddess - 01/15/2009
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Very dark, but I really enjoyed reading this! Only thing, weather it was intentional or not, I don;t know. But they way you write (I handed the can to him, and sat down next to him. I got wet. It was still raining.) How lots of sentences start with I, or He. I would say that I didn't enjoy that so much as the actual story, but it's also something you can get used to and ignore. That is of course if your like me and find it irritating. Sorry, but just thought I'd give my opinion.
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- Lord niiko - 01/15/2009
- Its a best 5/5
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