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Recap: I had this dream. At least I thought it was until later that day at work. Hassled around with my brother. Accidentally kneed him...(oops) And oh yea, this creepy kid around my age comes into my work and tells me, "I told you I'd find you."
I stand there, feet frozen to the ground. Staring straight at him. 'This isn't happening..' I think to myself.
"Oh, but it is Azra." He replied to my thoughts.
"H..How do you know me?" I ask him.
"I've known you for a very long time. Longer than you can ever imagine." He glared at me.
I could feel my feet starting to come back. Slowly, I put my cell in my pocket. He turned around and walked to the windows opposite of me. That's when I took my chance. I dashed to the back door and made it outside.
As I kept running, I looked behind me and didn't see him. 'Ha! Can't even keep up with me. Is he really that slow?' I look back infront of me to watch where I'm going. I bump into something and fall to the ground.
"Stupid girl." I heard his voice. I looked up to see him right there.
"How did you do that?!" I asked.
"Oh, there are a lot of things I can do." He smiled.
I slowly got up and backed away. Bad idea. M back ended up pressed against a brick wall. Then I heard a silent woosh and he was inches away from my face. I took a sharp breath in as his hands went to my arms, caressing them. It sent shivers all over my body, and yet I found it...Pleasurable. I closed my eyes, not wanting to look at him anymore. 'Knowing that what I'm feeling...How I'm feeling about him...Has to be his work. He said he could do lots of things. Maybe this is just one of them?'
"St..Stop. Please." I demanded weakly.
"Aww, and why would I want to do that? I've looked for you for so long. It started to become unbareable. Until I found you." He whispered in my ear as he grazed his lips down my ear to my neck.
I feel so weak. I couldn't help myself from feeling this way. I wanted to pass out. Right here. In his arms. Somehow knowing that I would be safe with him. But this can't be right.
I could feel myself gradually slipping into unconciousness.
I feel warm, and secure near him. I felt myself fall forward, and his arms caught me and wrapped around me. They feel welcoming. Like he's been waiting for this day. I relaxed and heard my last calming breath go out as I slipped away.
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2010 |
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- Title: Forbidden Love (Chpt. 2)
- Artist: Ashley_Winston
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The second chapter of my original book, Forbidden Love. Enjoy and please rate and comment. I will take any advice to put towards my work. :]
Thanks!! <3 (>")> - Date: 07/01/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Meggie Marie - 07/05/2010
- Haha. I know. I hate Finding stupid mistakes. I hate it even more when other people find those mistakes. You should read my story sometime. It's not that bad if you find the right one..
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- Ashley_Winston - 07/05/2010
- Haha wow xD. I can't believe I left out the y.. Thanks a ton (:. And yea, I agree. I like others to read my work too.
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- Meggie Marie - 07/02/2010
- "M back ended up pressed against a brick wall" You forgot about the "y" and I can't find the second one again, but I know it's in there. Trust me, I know it's really hard to find the spelling errors in your own work because you know what it says so you just fly right through it without paying attention. That's why I like other people to look over my stuff because they notice and tell me.
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- Ashley_Winston - 07/02/2010
- Haha, thanks a lot guys (:. What were the spelling errors?
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- Meggie Marie - 07/02/2010
- I had a spelling mistake telling you about yours... I'm not fit for this Just joking... Maybe
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- Meggie Marie - 07/02/2010
- That's really Good. I counted two spelling mistakes but other than that great. Tell me when you write more.
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- Captain Christine-Daae - 07/01/2010
- AGH!!!! Give me a third chapter pleeeeeeeeease! I am now addicted to your story. HEHEHEHE biggrin
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