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...i saw as the battle was faught. i did not no wat to do i shot and took cover thinking about my family and my country. i saw the man beside me got shot
i yelled "we need a medict over here" i saw the man die in pain as he told me "tell my familly i love the-". i soon noticed his voice he was my best friend george in the army. i felt great rage and i took his grenades and threw them. Then my captain yelled retreat. but i couldnt i was stuck i was stuck if i moved even a meter i would have been killed my numbers of bullets. i watched in fear as my team left without me. i knew here i would be found captured and tortured.i looked at the terrorists asthey shot at the helecopters. i knew this was my chance to run and hide. i looked around and i saw a small cave around a half a mile or so away.i loaded my gun and picked up my friends sr25 sniper. i ran for my life carrying my gun and georges gun plus the weight of my canteen and binoculars and survival gear. i finally reached the cave and made a little camp sorta in and a lil bit outside the cave. ~~~~~~~~~~
hope u like it im going to make more =)
- by Joshua Cullen |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: the abondoned soldier
- Artist: Joshua Cullen
- Description: ... i do not no wats im talkkin about... i just thout it would b a good story .
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: army
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Comments (3 Comments)
- cemera - 04/24/2009
- that was great, you do need to check your grammer tho
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- kae30 - 07/24/2008
- thats really asamoe i love it your a great writer i love you talk to u later bye
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- Joshua Cullen - 07/16/2008
- lol i forgot to mention i suck at writing lol
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