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in new york city there is a hero in the night. no i don't mean batman. i'm trever stone other wise known as the demon slayer. i'm 17 i'm five foot eleven and i'm majorly illtempered when i'm in a bad mood. but any ways i never realized that slaying demons was so exosting on the body. but i think the main reason is because i has a huge sword on my back but i'll get to that later. but this is how i first started out as a demon slayer and as a boyfriend to my partner jamie rose.
chapter 1
a family secret
it was late into a summer vacation for trever stone. when he woke up he heared the birds churping. which he hated the most but his sister likes it. his family is alittle off to put in a matter of speaking. he knows his dad real well he some times takes trever with him on his adventures with him. but not this summer. he never enjyed staying with his mom mainly for the fact that she is perky as in talking and almost everything else she busted in his room and in the most annoying voice ever she said "wakey wakey time to get up honey!!" 4laugh , trever just glared at her. his glare is like a thousand dagers. he said with a groan. "mom i'm 17 not 3. so can you please stop." stressed , she had a flat face. she said with a moan, "well it looks like someone's grumpy. well i can change that. i got some news for you.", trever got interested at this news. he asked, "what's the news?", his mother answered, "i talked with your father he said for your birthday since he wasn't there for that day he said u can go with him for the rest of the summer.", trever jumpped right out of bed and pushed his mom out of his room ten minutes later he was out all dressed and packed. his dad was waiting outside the house. trever was wrapped around his fathers arms and his dad jumped and flew off.
*ok now i'll tell you guys who my dad is and why he has the ability to fly. ok. my dad is known as the demange(diffrent story). his body is all demon but he has a good heart. he likes to take me with him on his adventures as father son time. but this time is different.
trever and is father were in indonisia at an old temple. trever asked his dad, "what is this place?", his dad answered with, "your birthday gift is in here.", they walked in and there was a giant circle. trever's dad said, "step into the center of the circle. you see son you have demonic blood well half of it that is. this circle will awaken it.", after trever stepped into the circle his father chanted an enchantment that would activate his abilities. trever's arm's started to go numb. his hair jetted out and after ten minutes the transformation was over. trever's dad walked over with a black cloak and an umberela hat. his father said, "put these on. you'll need them for training.", trever put the clothes on and followed his dad.
- by Thatdudeinthehoodie |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: demon slayer
- Artist: Thatdudeinthehoodie
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Description:
the first chapter of my series.
it's about a 17 year old named trever stone. he learns that he's part demon. but after an attack by demon's that killed his family he learns that one of his family members sent the demons. now he and his sidekick/girlfriend jamie rose must find out who did it and along with having normal high school lives.
note* trever is narating in the story he'l pop in every now and again to explain things.
i mention another story i'll bring up later - Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Android Anna - 10/12/2008
- I love the plot you have going biggrin
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- VinDrops - 07/17/2008
- You need too work on your grammar and style. And the emoticons? A big fat no-no. The best advice anyone can give you is: read. You can't be a writer with out being a reader. Good luck!
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- captain sexy12 - 07/17/2008
- it sucks
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- Dragonfanatic24 - 07/17/2008
- You seem to have a pretty good plot going on, but can you work on your spelling other than that its great. 4/5 stars!
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- T A N G L E D W H I M PS - 07/17/2008
- ooh nice chapter
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