- Click,Clack.The sound of running filled the house.A new family had just moved in,they were not the brightest bunch.The house was very dirty and had a horrible smell that was so horrible it could not be described.But they were happy with it,they cleaned it up in a couple months.While watching the news,they saw that there was an earthquake coming there way,so they took everything fragile and stuffed it into a box.But when the earthquake came,it was stronger then it was expected to be.Part of the house fell down,trapping one of the three children.The child did not die,though.(Yeah they got the child out from under under like,a ton of wood and bricks and stuff)No major wounds.They took the child to the doctor,when the doctor examined the child,she asked the parents what happened,the parents said the child was trapped under a ton of debris from their house when there was an earthquake earlier.The doctor was shocked,the child was 5,and should have most likely died from that.The family went back to their house.They had a babysitter watch the other two children.The parents thought it was unsafe for the family to stay there until the house was repaired,so they stayed at their relatives house for a 2 months.When they returned to their house,it looked fine,the father was the first to enter,he stood still several steps in.There was another hole through the roof,their was a small stuffed toy like thing n the ground.The father was terrified and stayed away from it,then a second child,also 5,ran to it,she smiled and picked it up.The parents asked if they could see it,so the child let them.It looked almost exactly like the person they were staying with the 2 months they were away,but one hand was gone,and so were both legs.The parents were scared of the resemblance(sorry if i spelt it wrong)so they went to check on the person,to find that the same thing had happened.The next few weeks were fine,until while listening to the radio the mother heard that there was a murderer near that area,the mom kept it to herself,hoping that what she feared would happen.She found the third child,also 5(correct,triplets[sorry if i spelt that wrong]),and hugged her and cried.The child had no idea what was happening,so she hugged back.The mother then suddenly became interested in religions,mythology,and stuff like that.The children's birthday was coming up,and then the mother thought randomly,and then noticed,there would be three 6s.The mother was terrifed,because they were born on june 6th 2000.A week after the birthday everything was fine.The mother had worried for nothing.The father was walking to the store because they were low on eggs.He took one the children along.The father was hit by a car.He survived.But several weeks later,he was in a plane,but nobody knew that the pilot has been thinking about suicide for some time now,and the pilot did so.The mother was horrified,she would not stop crying.In the mother's dream she heard something whispering''2 down,one to go....''.She woke up right away,it was 3:00AM.So she ate an early breakfast and watched TV until the children woke up.But two did not,they died without any explanation.There was 1 child left.The mother was scared to death.[not really to death]Because it was the child who was with the father when he was hit by the car.She knew what she had to do,but it was her last child,and could not get the courage to do it.Half a year later,the mother and the child vanished.[sucky ending,huh?]
- Title: The Children
- Artist: Benkai800
- Description: i was kinda bored,so i decided to post this,i came up with it as i wrote,so it kinda sucks,it's just a little story.Sorry to anyone if i brought back some poopy memories.It took me an hour to make,so please be gentle. =(
- Date: 07/23/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- firefox228 - 11/27/2009
- ok. that has ALOT of potential. it would be realy great if u would take this and elaborate. show don't tell. describe the events, the scenery. switch points of view. if u have the time and the patience and the will, take this to new heights. then pm me. i would want to read it!!! good job.
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- emo vampiress rose - 01/17/2009
- Ur right it could of had a better ending, but otherwise that was a cool story.
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- Lady Knightingale - 12/31/2008
- It's alright. However, it will be better for the eyes if you put them in paragraphs. ^^ Other than that it's a good story.
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- Cake and Grief Counseling - 07/23/2008
- Separate the periods from the next letter please.
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