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detective tim green was your average private eye, that is, until jan 17 2007, it was a slow day of sitting and doing nothing, but then the phone rang. tim: detective green, can i help you? ???: meet me and city park at 7:00 sharp, ill be waiting and the bench near the river. tim: who is this?
hello? hmm( hangs up) LATER THAT DAY tim decided to see was up and arrived at 6:30. he sat waiting next to a strange duffel bag. he waited and waited until he heard a beeping noise, eh, not the best try, he said as he kick the bag ind the water and jumps behind the bench, then he sees a bomb under the bench. " crap" then a little note pops out. oh, he looks around and reads it. " you can see me if you can catch me, look behind you." he looks behind him, he sees and train,. burning_eyes he runs to the car
- Title: a detective story ch 1
- Artist: gghhjja
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- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: detective
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- jazzie62605 - 05/17/2009
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- b00_2 - 05/10/2009
- eh, bad grammar.
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- xCaNdYyx3 - 12/14/2008
- lol
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