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In the cold unbearable darkness i sit. Waiting for my Savior, my shinning knight. Yet when i turn, to greet them. They vanish as only a trick of the eye. Oh! how long i've waited. to feel the sun warmth on my cheeks. To waded in the cold spring water.
Yet the chains of many things wrap around me. Like snakes choking there pray. Now i'm unable to breath. And i sing my last calling. Of the day i will dance in the twilight. Under a great willow tree. And sing of the past. Of the days that i lived in the darkness.
Please reach my hands, before they make me bow. Save me from my attacks. From the pain in my heart. I'm calling, save me. Hear my cries! Before i fall. I'm losing myself. Falling apart, into many things. Yet i reach out my hands. Tears of pain rolling down my face.
Save me! i call silently inside. As the hungry lions charge at me. They jump in the darkness. They are coming for me. There stained crimson in blood. They are coming faster and faster. I reach my hand up into the darkness. Despertly waiting for the one i love to save me.
I began to scream. A scream that rips through the darkness. A light comes from my chest. I shield my eyes waiting for the crimson lions devore me. Yet no pain comes from me. Inside i'm runing through the darkness.
Looking for someone i lost long ago. When i finally found them. i reached out my hand. As tears fell down my face. The tears bring life to the darkness. Bringing flowers of white. That cast the light into the darkness.
The hidden light inside of my heart brusts open. Casting all shadow into light. But as i lay. My end draws near. Yet with all my light. I lay, not being saved. My chains dragging me far away.
And i float away...into the rays of Darkness...........
- Title: The Chains of Dispear
- Artist: Orah247
- Description: Think about it...........
- Date: 08/10/2008
- Tags: twilight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- llerret - 08/10/2008
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It's a great poem but I only have this to say.(it apllies to many)
Why are there so many "dark" and "emo" poems? Can't you people honestly write about the good in the world. There are other emotions besides depression - Report As Spam
- sumomoplum335 - 08/10/2008
- Pretty good u had some grammar and spelling mistakes though...u used the wrong kind of "there"
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- princess-sylveon - 08/10/2008
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It's okay, but...
I stopped reading half way through because I can't stand your grammar! You should have somebody go over it for you. - Report As Spam
- Rienne-Straub - 08/10/2008
- reaaly cool i must say my kind of writing.
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