Life's not always fair

• Artist: DemonVampire180
• Description: It's the beginning of a novel I'm working on. So far, it's just barely over 15,000 words, and not even a complete four chapters yet. I'm still in the editing stage so yeah....
• Date: 09/01/2008
• Tags: lifes always fair

Every time I looked at him, I could swear he just looked right through me. Like I was a piece of shattered glass. Well, I guess you could say that's exactly what I was. Shattered glass. It's not that I wasn't attractive or whatever, it's just that, my sister was more attractive. Long blond hair, perfect red lips, and a perfect hourglass figure. Who actually HAS those any more? She just got under my skin. And also, her D-cupped breasts she was so proud to show off.

What pisses me off more though is that she claims they're not implants. Ha. What a lie! She got implants the day after her sweet sixteen birthday party. Mom and dad didn't care. She was their first daughter. Spoil the oldest, make fun of the youngest right? Well somehow, that just didn't seem right to me. And every time I voice my opinion, guess who gets bitched at? Me. Anyway, there's not much you can do when your sister is a supermodel girl, and you're just the average guy.

Yes. Guy. I am a boy. And am in love with another boy. My name is Taylor. Just recently I had my twentieth birthday. Out of school, out of house. I'd figured people would know that I knew exactly what every slur of homosexual was. There were a few I hadn't heard of, though. The most popular in high school were f*****t, queer, gay, dyke... You know. The usual ones.

Again, that's beside the point. I'm here to tell my story. It's not exactly happy, but it's better than never telling it. Telling you of the three year struggle I had of trying to live through high school, and trying to hit it off with a guy I knew was straight

Comments

[Firion_Kenson]

You wrote the intro very well, especially how you made it seem like it was being told from the perspective of a younger sister, only to reveal that it's a gay boy. Very unique problem that the protagonist is facing. I hope to see more of this soon.

[Thatdudeinthehoodie]

not a bad story. the only complaint i really have is there's barely a plot to it. i got interested in the story. but if ur planning on having more of a plot the next chapter it's something that can b overlooked other then that good story.


read my new story demange if u want 2 c a real interesting pre-plot. the plots in the description.