- this was the wrong night to leave the night was cold but the moon was full and a full moon was good flying so i picked up my bag and took a deep breath and with my goal in mind i took off my broom was unstable but fast i had smooth sailing out of that little town i could not think stright so i just keep on going till i saw my new home "venezia" i said my heart glowing just like all the lights that would be in my head till i died but then i heard a girl screem it was so close but i knew i was to high to hear her so i thought she was a witch trying to get to me so i found her aura signal and used all my power to get to her fast i heard her screem again this time both in my head and my ears i dipped in to the street wich with any broom was dumb with my pice of saw dust was like trying to shoot a shot gun through a two inch pipe from a yard and i paied for is by hitting a pole and slamming my face in the ground but i could see her at the next corner so i ran with the speed of a hound of heck and got to her to see a hooded man stab her in the chest with out a second look i sent a shard of glass in to him and slid next to her i could feal her heart stop then i used to word i will never use again and brought her life back in to her body and as her eyes opened mine closed and i was out ......................
- Title: second hand broom chapter one
- Artist: spexx94
- Description: this is the first chapter of a story i put into my school news paper under the name King of the Dark Corador (I know it is miss spelled)
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: second hand broom venice
- Report Post
Comments (2 Comments)
- Karusa Kurayami - 01/06/2012
- interesting, could use some editing.
- Report As Spam
- dpatlakh - 09/12/2008
- awsome...
- Report As Spam