when i hear you

• Artist: Depressed_Teddy_Bear
• Description: this is a song about somthing that happend to me
• Date: 10/11/2008
• Tags: hear

When i hear you i will wake when you are there my heart you shall take i wait till the day you come to save me i love you when i hear you talk. when you are near i can hardly breath, when you are told i can harly speak so when i see you hold me tight i know you love me yes o so tight maby u hate me maby you dont i hope i will be with you more and more so help me please i need you so just kiss me and know i am there when i hear you i know you are there and that is why i love you my dear

Comments

[a_broken_soul_4_life]

wow that is really cute but try putting the difrent sentinces on difrent lines like in my poems so people know that it is a song your spelling is good other then that keep up the good work cool

[QuantumMythics]

I have no idea what that even said! The grammer is whacked up, it seemed like one long run-on sentence, and I can't tell if those were lyrics or if you were just typing to see if you could get something out of this. -_- Learn to type

[summertopaz]

i like it.. what i like more is that YOURE a JB fan too!! smile ) LOL