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The wolf stood frozen in the moonlight that peaked through the dense forest. His mouth was set in a vicious snarl, dripping with the blood of Emily's companion. She stared, her face blank, at her friend, his mouth still agape in a silent scream, his clothes ragged, torn, and stained deep red. We were just going hunting, Emily thought. To get food for winter.
Suddenly rage boiled up inside. This wasn't fair! Her best friend since childhood wasn't meant to die on a hunting trip! He deserved to die, 100 years old, with his children and his grandchildren and his great grandchildren surrounding him. They were only 18, it wasn't fair!
Without thinking, she lunged at the gray wolf. All she thought of as she tore whatever came within her reach was Gabriell. Gabriell, her best friend, her secret crush since they were 14, the boy who was now dead. His family would never see him again. He would never graduate, never go to college, and never have children. It's not fair!! Emily repeated in her head over and over as the wolf continued to whimper as it slowly and painfully died, under the mercy of a woman blind with madness.
She stopped suddenly as she realized what she had just done. She saw the bloody carcass of the wolf, felt the blood on her own hands, wallowed in the sorrow and guilt in her own heart. She shouldn't have let Gabriell get so far ahead of her. She shouldn't have killed the wolf, whose matted fur shined gruesomely red and gray in the last moonbeams of the night. She looked once more at the body of Gabriell, bearing the same red reflection of the wolf. His face had been left untouched; it was now paler than the moon, eyes in permanent shock and lifelessness.
Forget Gabriell, she told herself, attempting to cope with the recent happenings. Gabriell doesn't exist. The wolf doesn't exist. The little town of Miriade doesn't exist. My family doesn't exist. I don't exist...
The forest. The forest is all I have now. This is my forest. She continued to deny everything from her life in her head, walking farther north, the opposite direction of Miriade. She had become... the Huntress.
- by xX_Sorrowful_Sin_Xx |
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- | Submitted on 11/07/2008 |
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- Title: The Huntress
- Artist: xX_Sorrowful_Sin_Xx
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Description:
Okay, I got the idea from this book I was reading. I guess not quite, because the book just mentioned a huntress character. I was bored, so I drew a girl in good hunting clothes, with a bow strapped in back. Then I pictured my own story.
It's just a few paragraphs of a full story I plan on writing. It's about 375 words. Hope you like it! - Date: 11/07/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Fawn Called Innocent - 06/11/2010
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You portray the human's impulses and feelings very well. I enjoyed this story a lot - One of the books i'd pick off of the book shelf in the store. The only thing to make this story better would be providing more description for Gabriell and Emily, so I could have understood there physical properties more.
Other than that, you get a 9//10. <3 - Report As Spam
- Deathrock Taco - 12/14/2008
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mmm
There's potential in the story
Good luck in your story Mistress of Felines
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- Hanawie - 12/11/2008
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Pretty good. I'd try adding some different things other than just "It's not fair!"
There's definitely talent here, and I think, with some polishing, this could be really good. - Report As Spam
- The Darke Assassin - 12/11/2008
- Very interesting.
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- a_VAMPire-s_deAth_KIss - 12/10/2008
- wow, that's cool. i wish there was more...
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- shatterhk - 12/08/2008
- very good, i wish there was more to read ^^
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- MistressofInk - 11/26/2008
- This is very intriguing and awesome but I'd watch some of my comma usage. Other than that, It almost comes across like a comic book sort of thing.
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