An Unlucky Star

• Artist: Xx_Unpure Goddess Nyx_xX
• Description: just a story that i thought of. i might draw it as a manga er comic thingy soon. so be watchful! >:3 totally mines, btw. it's a story about a character of my own, Ziva Kyniea, a witch-in-training, you could say. First page, so comment, rate, and enjooooyyyyyyy~ :3!
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: unlucky star witch ziva pixel

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She frantically ran through the woods, pushing branches and leaves out of her face. The thing roared beside her. The girl ran faster and faster, catching a glimpse of the shadowy figure, running by her between the cold, dead trees. Tears spilled from her eyes as she tried to escape the icy forest. She wiped her eyes with her sleeve, when the sound of the creature's footsteps crunching on snow stopped. She quit wiping her red face and turned around, wondering what had happened. Everything was silent, except for a heavy, huffing sound, which was not her own. The girl stood still. Her breaths were whispers compared to the starved panting of this monster. She shut her eyes tightly, hoping the thing would go away. It was quiet again. No breathing. No crunching on snow. Nothing. Suprised, the girl layed her head back in relief. Then she opened her eyes, and froze in fear.

It grinned hungrily, and roared.

Comments

[arise-alive-live]

wow that was good lol you a good writer like me,jk, well hahahah sorry im weird remember that hahaha even my storys are psyco..... did the person die??? that was interesting lol

[Xx_Unpure Goddess Nyx_xX]

lol its kinda supposed to be, but it 'splains it all in teh next chapter. >3< :3

[djreak]

that was sad and cool