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ONce along time ago a devi met an angel nd they fell madly in love.
But their love was forbidden, f they ever touched the angel would turn to dust in front of the devils eyes. So every night they would meet at the border between their two worlds and talk for hours. The angel longed to give the devil a long and passionate kiss. But the devil would ot let her he did not want to lose the woman he loved most in this world. Then one day the deil was to sent to war. the angel's face was covered in sparkling tears. " my love we hve a child. The devil told her "my love i will come back fro you and ask the gods to make an exception". The angel smiled "i love you my dearest come home soon". Then the devil left for war. ~2 years later~ The devil came back from war and found out his dearest angel had turned to dust she had been touched by an enemy devil. Black tears rained down the devils face "why why did this have to happen my love im sorry im so sorry i wasnt here to protect you". then the devil herd a child crying out "dada dada". A small child was laying in th crattle. "my son my son you're alive". The devil took his child to the grave of his wife. "my love i will protect out son i will protect Apolo"
- by Tatsuki_Namina |
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- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: forbidden
- Artist: Tatsuki_Namina
- Description: i got bored and i saw a pic of and angel and a devil holding hands in the arena so yea ths is wat happened
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: forbidden
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Tatsuki_Namina - 12/05/2008
- in this wen an angel find her one and only love a child grows inside her so its the devils child
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- Naimena - 12/04/2008
- If she can't touch the devil, how did they have a child?
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- X --- Imperfectiion - 12/01/2008
- oh that is sad but good. 4/5 becuse of the mistakes
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- Kafeole11 - 11/29/2008
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Mistakes you made include :
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Please look a the screen while you write!
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- Tatsuki_Namina - 11/28/2008
- Ii no i ddnt under stand it a lil to but my friends liked it so here it is
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- Harmonious Dischord - 11/28/2008
- i saw the same picture! and this is good, but a little confusing.
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