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today is the first day of the christmas season im gatherd by the tree handed a gift but i do not know who its from i open it and find..... a................video game thats cool i wanted that so i thank them for the gift i walked upstairs and as i walked i herd somthing a scream as the pellets of bullets came through the window all i could hear were screams and crys for help but i couldnt do anything i couldnt move it was like i had givin up all hope on helping my family as i finally relized what was happening i called 911 and thy came at about 15 minitues but it felt like a century i was huddled in the corner of the room rocking slowly back and forth back and forth and i did that till they took me to there car said there apoligies and watched me leave as i was driving away i noticed somthing a man in a black hat walking away from the house holding a machine gun...........
till next time thanks for reading ill write soon
- by dylansauve |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: christmas and every thing BAD
- Artist: dylansauve
- Description: a boy finds that his family have been murderd
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: christmas every thing
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ginjo1995 - 03/09/2009
- horrible grammar and absomlutely pointless. i suggest u either learn to write or give up. either way dont post garbage like this anymore.
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- Fallende Feder - 11/29/2008
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That think was just one giant run on sentence.
Learn your grammar. D< - Report As Spam