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“Are you lonely?” I ask him as I stand there sitting on the edge of his desk. He looks up to me with a confused look in his eye. I ask again, “Are you lonely?” No answer is given as he politely similes. That fake smile. “No.” He replies. I frown a little. “You look lonely.” I say. His smile widens as he manages to close his eyes. I look at him and finally say, “I was once lonely.” He stops smiling to look at me. “I know that smile.” I sigh. My eyes wander away from his lips to his eyes. “The one you use. I used to use it too.” I look away to his wall. “That smile hid the pain that I felt each day. That smile, was a sign to others not to worry about me.” I look back at him. I continue, “But that was a long time ago.” I smile. “That was before I met you.” He smiles a little.
I quietly think to myself, Maybe not today but one day I’ll make you smile. I’ll make you reveal to me your true smile.
- by Sesskogaru |
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- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: "Are you lonely?"
- Artist: Sesskogaru
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Short but strong.
Comment if you like. ;) - Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: lonely
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- Evil Percy - 04/01/2011
- 3/4. 67% approval. Good rating.
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 09/16/2009
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^^
It is quite interesting and powerful~
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- Unknownledge - 12/04/2008
- Very good.
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- AliciaChristx3 - 12/02/2008
- Awww (:
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- schismatics - 12/02/2008
- awww...so optimistic
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- Erick_E_M_S - 12/01/2008
- Awesome!
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- RyukZaraki - 12/01/2008
- hello read mine its the one title SKY-Part 1- The day death died
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