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A boy and girl
The best of friends
From elementery to high school
From beginning to end
Through all the years
Their friendship grew
They both felt the same
But never knew
Each wakeing moment
Sence the day they met
They both loved eachother
Sunrise to sunset
He was all she had
In her terrible life
Hes was the one
Who kept her from her knife
She was his angel
She made him smile
When life threw him curves
She made it all worth while
Then one day
Things went terribly wrong
The next few weeks
Were like a sad song
He made her jealous
On purpose he tried
When the girl asked"Do you love her?"
On purpose he lied
He played with jealously
Like it was a game
Little did he know
Things would never be the same
His plan was working
But he had no clue
How wrong things would go
The damage he would do
On night she broke down
Feeling very alone
Just her and the blade
No one was home
She dialed his number
He answerd "Hello"
She told him she loved him
Then hung up the phone
He raced to her house
But came a minute too late
Found her lying in blood
And her heart had no rate
Beside her was a note
And in it her confession
Her love for this boy
Her only obsession
As he read the note
He knelt down and cried
Grabbed her knife
And that night they both died
She was found in his arms
Both of them dead
Under her note
His hand writting said
She loved me so
But she never knew
That all this time
I've loved her too
- by michealphelpsrocks |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: his hand writing said.......
- Artist: michealphelpsrocks
- Description: yeah i know the writing is pretty depressing
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: hand writing said
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Plastic Poptart - 02/15/2009
- Omg! It almost made me cry sad 5/5
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- xmunchiemachinex - 01/30/2009
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awww...that's so sad! T^T
loved it btw! - Report As Spam
- xJuneAngelx - 12/13/2008
- i have to admit it was pretty good but that doesn't mean i like it......HOW COULD YOU GIVE ME A 2/5?????I HATE YOU
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- skitzylover - 12/13/2008
- =D That was great! A little depressing though... =(
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- VienLai382 - 12/13/2008
- thats goood 5/5
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