- "Grr how in the heck am I supposed to get out of the hole if my hands are tied behinde my back?!" Tanuco shouted. "Well I can't tell you it's a test....I know your not that dumb Tanuco geez" Mr.Bounce said "What was that?!" Tanuco asked."Oh nothing,nothing you better hurry you've only one hour to get out of that hole" Mr.Bounce said with a grin on his face. Tanuco tried to jump up onto a rock but..he fell.He tried to use his chin.......he fell and this time Tanuco was dead tired. "Huff,huff I can't even move my body" Tanuco complained "Well I see now that you're not even going to make it well than Goodbye forever" Mr.Bounce said as he turned away and the hole was as small as mouse. "....No...don't give up on me....no. Grrr COME ON BODY MOVE DAMN IT MOVE!!" Tanuco stuggled to get up, then something happened, something no one expected even I did not expect it and i'm writting the story! Some werid black shadow over took his face his whole face was pure black.His eyes turned pure white. "GAAAAAAHH!!!!! WHATS GOING ON!! AHHHHHHHH!!!!" Tanuco said as more of the shadows over took his face.While Mr.Bounce was walking away BOOM!!! A huge crash sound came out of now where.Tanuco was out of the hole, he made the hole wider."How...how did you do that? Is that even possible?!" Mr.Bouce worried "Well,whats my next test" Tanuco said as he smerked and took the pure black mask with pure with eyes off his face.Tanuco's eyes were still white but they soon faded away. "I'm glade you asked Tanuco, now we test your speed." Mr.Bouce said as he pulled out his pure black Katan he chanted these words. "Awaken Isea my beast of clam" as he said that the blade part of the katana disapperard but in his hands he still held on to the handle.Tanuco pulled out his sword not knowing whats in store,then Mr.Bounce raised his hands and let go of his handle the handle stayed floating in mid-air.Then Tanuco was surrounded by the katana of Mr.Bounce he was surrounded by Isea. "So Tanuco are you ready?" Mr.Bounce said (To be continued...)
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- Title: ~Ice~ (Chapter 6)
- Artist: Your Only Black Friend
- Description: Kind of lost track....
- Date: 12/14/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Raziel is mine - 12/26/2008
- I thought this had terrible grammar, which made it impossible to keep my attention and enthusiasm to read. If you wish to improve your grammar, I'd be happy to help. If not, that's fine. I really couldn't care less.
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- Kyonnai-Chan - 12/14/2008
- good job Tanuco i think you should add Cookiez >w<
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- iD a r k i e e - 12/14/2008
- Aren't cha gonna add meh D: xDD roflol but...Gewd job ;3
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