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Once upon a time there is men tie on the tree his name is Florante he is tie up there with the wild animals and one day there is persian name aladin he is there because his father the king of persia get angry with him because he don't want his father love his next wife but aladin is love with her the next wife of the king of persia is to young now aladin is now on the forest
when the two escaped from the wild animals Florante is awake now he is shock because the enemy of their clan is helping him the name of the clan of Florante is Albanya now Florante is fainted again but his heart shouting the name of Laura because Laura is his one true LOve heart heart he is crying when his on tie on the tree he remember all the romantic moments of them two
now when Florante is awake he is telling the story to aladin the story of his childhood life , his bad memories & good memories he find out that the duke of albanya duke alfonso is his worst enemy first they are friends and he almost die because he is so gellouse to florante he is smart so many girls are crazy with him when they are doing a story in front of their classmates alfonso almost killed him with a dagger now menandro saved him now they are now best friends
now florante got a letter from albanya he got a bad&good news the good news is his going to go home and the bad news is his mother died the princess of albanya his mother when he is going to go home the professor of florante tell him that be careful with alfonso because alfonso is from albanya too now when his home at the albanya the father of florante hug him so muchhh and now florante is grown up he met a lady name Laura then he got in love with Laura now they are now BF & GF they are so romantic when he is finished with the war Laura will clean him the caused of florante 's misery because of alfonso now florante is now on the tree
then they travel , travel , travel then they see Laura and love of aladin now the two lady"s tell the two florante and aladin that there enemys are dead now they go back to the albanya florante and Laura they are now the king and queen of albanya and the love of aladin and aladin go back to persia and they are now the ruler of persia
THE END!!!!
- by LiL_ScReaMo_Dude |
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- | Submitted on 12/17/2008 |
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- Title: Florante at Laura
- Artist: LiL_ScReaMo_Dude
- Description: ok this is a short story from philippines actually it is a long story but i want it short
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- LiL_ScReaMo_Dude - 01/28/2009
- hehe salamt
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- Choco Leibniz - 01/24/2009
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Wow! Ipagmalaki ang Pinoy!
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- LiL_ScReaMo_Dude - 12/19/2008
- thnxxxxx
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- Sir Procrastinator - 12/19/2008
- I understand you translated it resulting in a loss of flow. But that is what also killed it. Work on your flow.
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- LiL_ScReaMo_Dude - 12/18/2008
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ThNk U
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- H e y E s s i e - 12/17/2008
- Nice translation! 5/5
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