The final chapter

• Artist: Devioxis
• Description: not a land that was... i need to vent so i wrote this. hope u like it
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: final chapter devioxis

So there the Angel stood, in all her blazing glory. befalling the man who wished for nothing more than to kill himself. she spoke to him in a voice like the wonderful sound of the tiny chirps of birds, "Is this Truly what you want?"
"It is," He spoke.
The angel held out a hand to him. "Come with me then. I must cast you into the fires of Hell."
The man took her hand but was not able to lift from the ground. "What is the meanin of this?"
She smiled "It appears you still have a job to do. untill then i bid u farewell."
And she left leaving the man to finish his unknown task...

Comments

[pure seyelance]

hmm not bad a little choppy, but rather good 4*

[Kogitsu]

Good writing style, but a few spelling errors. other than that is is a good piece of work.

[Nemo_Goes_Rawr]

ur really good weirdly no one wrote a comment