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I was laying on my bed asleep I was dreaming of a Banner with a green background the symbol on it was a sword with a crown on the hilt of the sword it had jewels upon it and a countless sea of men march before it wielding many weapons some I have never seen before then in a flash a star of light came down to earth it looked like a crimson fire trimmed with white it became a man when it reached the ground with black spiked armor and a spear with two blades on each end his hands were more like claws his feet more like hooves then behind him came monsters of many kinds the men who held the green banner high stopped and raised their weapons and both sides charged in the end two men remained the beast like man who came from above and a soldier from the green bannered army they were fighting fiercely the beast like man was swinging wildly the green bannered army soldier was doing as best as he could to dodge the wild swings of the fierce beast looking man who then caught the soldier of the green bannered army between the ribs his face went pale and he fell the beast man started cackling a menacing cackle he looked up and started laughing more then in a frightening voice said "A boy comes to defeat me! haha you shall die painfully" yes a boy a boy stood upon a slope looking down in one hand he wielded a sword
in the other the green banner the monster charged him cackling all the way the boy put the sword in the ground and a light bursted forward the monster stopped in his tracts a expression of horror on his pale face a being of much light jumped out of the blue light that was shooting out of the ground it was also trimmed with white this new person had white hair in blue and white clothing wearing a silver sickle with writing upon it like runes this beast man then charged this angel looking being this new being drew his sword in a clash there swords were brought together lighting shot out of one fire another they pressed against each other the beast man punched the other man and he went tumbling to the ground this demon brought his sword up and was coming down when this angel like being picked his sword up and stabbed the beast man or demon in the chest light shot out of were the sword was in place in the Demon or beast man then white shot out dissolving him and a final menacing scream came out and rang through the battlefield! then white shot into my mind I saw nothing.
- by American Lad |
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- | Submitted on 01/06/2009 |
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- Title: Kingdom Imagination Part 1
- Artist: American Lad
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Description:
A imaginative Story that is not complete.
Please no one steal my idea and don't make rude comments etc.
and I am pretty bad at spelling so excuse me at that. - Date: 01/06/2009
- Tags: elesarwaye part
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Comments (2 Comments)
- i_Sexii_bi0tch_ - 03/26/2009
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thats true dee32693 smile
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- dee32693 - 01/15/2009
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If you are bad at spelling (and apparently, grammar and punctuation), you should use a document program to fix it. Microsoft word works wonders. There are also some online spellcheckers that you could've searched up.
I'm sorry but this is bad yo.
Another word of advice is to separate paragraphs and changing views with an enter so it isn't just a huge block of text that isn't formatted correctly.
Just tryin to help you out dude. - Report As Spam