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"Look Mark! I think I hit something!" I whispered.
My brother Mark and I were digging for worms in our backyard.
See, we live in Delaware so we have this really nice lake by us where we like to fish. But we have to find the worms ourselves. Anyway, I knew I hit something so Mark came over to help me get it out.
"I wonder what it is. It looks like a chest." We grabbed the sides of the "chest" and pulled it up. It was a chest.
"Wow Mark! What do you think is in it, like, treasure, or gold!" Ok, I'm not that weird but I mean for crying out loud we just found a chest!
"I don't know but lets open it there isn't a lock on it." We opened the chest.
My eyes became big when I saw what was in the chest.
"Oh my gosh Mark! Look dolls!" I held up the boy doll and the girl doll. They were both old I could tell. They both had torn clothes, and the hair was falling out, but why would they be buried in a chest?
"Ewww" Mark said. I rolled my eyes and then we went inside. I showed them to mom.
"That's nice. But they look, um, well dirty." I walked away, and I don't know but, it looked like the girl doll winked at me.............
Probably my imagination I thought. Dolls can't wink. Today was friday.
That meant we watch a movie together as a family. I chose Ella Enchanted. I loved that movie and so did my mom. My brother and dad didn't but they would live. I set the dolls on the couch next to me and we started the movie. After the movie, It was time for bed.
"'Night!" I called over my shoulder as I walked up the stairs. I set the dolls on my dresser and jumped into bed. I looked up at the dolls. They didn't look normal. They didn't look like they had when I found them. The boy doll then laughed. I jumped. I knew it wasn't my brother. OMFG no way I thought. the dolls can't be alive. I even saw their lips move. I jumped out of bed and threw them into my closet. Now I could sleep. There was no way they could bother me now. I closed my eyes. Then I eard scratching at the closet door. Then I heard a little girl's voice.
"We're coming for you Amy. We're coming for you......." The last thing Amy saw was the little girl doll open the closet door. Holding a knife. And that was the last that family ever saw Amy again.
- by Sam Cullen6 |
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- | Submitted on 01/18/2009 |
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- Title: Devil Dolls
- Artist: Sam Cullen6
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Description:
When Amy finds two little dolls she thinks they're just as cute as a button!
After a few hours she didn't think so anymore. She didn't even think they were human. She was right. - Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: devil dolls
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ShannonOhNoes - 08/29/2010
- this scaed me REALLY. i mean, the story is so obvious but it really did scare me! u got talent (;
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- Zombie Kebab - 07/09/2009
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Add more please xO
Also the story felt a little rushed.<3 - Report As Spam
- Lolita the Vampire - 02/19/2009
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why would she think the dolls are human?
this would be a better story if it had some sort of conclusion - Report As Spam
- Angelus Prime - 02/16/2009
- interesting concept but your writing style could use a lil spit and polish
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- xxPEACHFUZZ - 01/23/2009
- You can't do that to me! Write another part to the story!
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- deaffeet - 01/18/2009
- awsome
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