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what...how...he...its..him....f-from...the dream...? my breathing became short my eyes blacked in and out....i put a hand on my head trying to calm myself...but i couldnt control anything....i felt Lily put a hand on my shoulder...i..i...i....everything went black..."Jac! Jac! hey!" Lily yelled Mr.Fraqui ran over to my side "oh my! someone go get a nurse!" he said. Axel smiled and walked over to me "here..."he said in a very soft and beautiful voice, "ill take her...." Mr. Fraqui looked at Axel in the eye "but do you even know where they nurse is?!!" he yelled in an angery matter "Trust me..." Axel said nicely as he picked me up and walked out of the room...
i opened my eyes a little bit to Axel's beautiful gold eyes staring into mine...i was in the nurses room, sitting in a bed "h-huh? what happened?" i asked with a little shake in my voice Axel smiles at me with his pearl white teeth, "you fainted!" he laughed "oh...."i said back, i blushed. the nusre, Mrs-well Ms now, Ms.Flagon walked in the room...ever since her husband had died her eyes looked lonely and sad...her face looked worn out...and unhappy..."so how do you feel dear? " she asked me "i feel fine, thank you" i said "dont thank me! thnak this young man over here!" she pointed to Axel. "thank you...Axel right?" he nodded "and your name is?" he asked me "oh my name is Jacqueline, but you can call me Jac" i said he smiled at me "well im gonna go! see you later Jac!" he said as he touched my cheek....my eyes felt heavy...i couldnt keepthem open...so...i started to fall asleep...i heard his foot steps walk out of the room....no...dont...leave......
I woke up in a feild....i was standing there all alone...no one...a had a very bad feeling in my stomach...i heard a noice from behind me...i turned...no one...what is this place.....what..is...something grabed me! i struggled but i couldnt get loose...i tried and tired..but...i couldnt....i felt a cold breath move up and down my neck...and...and...and.........
i woke up from my dream breathing hard...i didnt know what time it was...i sat up in the bed and looked for a clock...there! oh..its lunch...i wonder...what Axel is going....
- by iloveyourmomsllama14 |
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- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: ~love story part 3~
- Artist: iloveyourmomsllama14
- Description: part 3~~
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: love story part
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Comments (4 Comments)
- nightmares_ strngeTale - 05/02/2009
- man..you should work for your grammars...
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- Ai Kiyomi - 04/02/2009
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Dosent make much sense...
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- Skadi Sundermount - 01/21/2009
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you need
to indednt
especially with
"speach patters"
this is to hard to read
and not interesting enough
to make the effot
what is unique about this relatioship
that readers should keep reading? - Report As Spam
- la Reina de calabaza - 01/19/2009
- thats really good! cant wait till' part 4! biggrin
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