swallowed by my own sorrow

• Artist: Taisaaloveeesyouu
• Description:
• Date: 01/26/2009
• Tags: swallowed sorrow

im lying there in the dark room, wondering about nothing , trying to get to sleep.
my mind keeps drifting to this one memory, a memory so full of hurt and repression, that even at my happiest moment i can not drown it out,
"i try" i whisper,
the darkness says nothing,
a wet tear of sorrow glides slowly down my cheek,
i hear a scream,
i try to concentrate,
to try to bring it back, to see if it was real,
then i realise it wasent real and neither is happyness,
at least not today, for me ,




by Taisa waterfall

Comments

[cheetah2750]

great! i love stuff like that! its so sad... sad

[xallthatglitters]

good, but sad :[

[Bentacore]

CAPITALIZATION! And of course spell check(Google can even do it for you.) The message, while depressing is good. Nice piece if you can get past the poor spelling and grammar.

[The_One_ReBorn]

depressing but great

[Ray of Mel]

WOW nice the shortest and best piece i've read on here ^^