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I demon girl is sitting on one side of the river. She was a devil and the land where she had lived was dark, and almost forgotten. She is staring at a boy on the other side. His blond hair and blue eyes, seem almost unreal to her. Nothing like she's ever seen before. They both have been coming to this stop for years. Unable to touch each other, because he was an angel and she was his exact opposite. The girl's brown hair and brown eyes reminder the boy of the earth, and the beauty of the forest. They had fallen in love, but because they where so different, their love for one another was forbidden. If one was to touch the other, they would die. Turn into dust and nothing would be left, but the wind howling in the place where they once stood. They would both sit there and talk for hours. About life, death, and the world. But one day, he asked her one question. One simple question. " Do you love me?" he said. The girl's soul lit up as he said this to her. She look up at him with her eyes filled with joy despite the darkness which surround her, and she said "Yes. Yes I do." The girl reached out her hand to him.. hoping to touch his just a little. He did the same. But the river was too far apart. She held her hand back, then looked at the flowing water bellow. A small tear fell down her face. Then, she spread her wings and started flying to the middle of the river. The boy was in shock, but knew what was about to happen and flew towards her as she did. As the wind picked up, the last thing you could see was two figures touch each others hands and lips soft as the rain, collide for two seconds and get turned into dust as they got washed away into the river.
Their love was forbidden, but some how.. it just managed to live for ever.
- Title: Love that died.
- Artist: Saradi
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Description:
This is a small story, based on a picture that some one drew a while back.
It's called "Love that died, but lived for ever."
Please vote fairly, and don't just vote it bad cause you fell like it. ):< - Date: 02/17/2009
- Tags: love died
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Comments (7 Comments)
- danni507 - 05/28/2010
- IT WAS GOOD SOME MISPELLING THOUGH, BUT OVERALL IT WAS BEAUTIFUL STORY
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- Texasrose1 - 02/21/2009
- That was a really touching story.I loved it so sad.
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- Lunya Arc - 02/19/2009
- Aw, that's amazing, Saradi <3 It's so sad and it really touched me.
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- X-YoKoAngel-x - 02/19/2009
- i loved it and wow its so sad
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- X-YoKoAngel-x - 02/19/2009
- way to go sis :3
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- Guy13257 - 02/19/2009
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its verry deep and it touches the heart
what a sad story. i love it - Report As Spam
- xxx-Lonel-xxx - 02/18/2009
- Kind of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Very good. I love it.
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