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Chapter 1: ``Stories´´
``Please, kill her, she is an abomination, she is not human!´´said the king, called Alnork to his emmisary, , he had mixed feelings, anger, sadness and joy were in his heart, after he talked with the emmisary, he walked to his room, and when he opened the door, he found his wife crying...
Mitsuki´s story
- How can you do this to your own blood!!! said the kings wife violently
- do what, my love? replied the king
- dont act like you dont know, its our daughter who is in risk!!! you want to kill her!!!
- are you crazy, what are you talking about!?
- i heard what you said to the emmisary, you asked him to kill our daughter accidentaly, just because she is not like us doesnt mean you must kill her!!!
- she is an abberation of nature!!
- but shes our daughter! you are such a monster!!
``shut up!! ´´ the king got out of control - and swung his baton straight to his wifes head, cracking her skull, the bone shards got incrusted in her brain, killing her...
Out of the room a 13 year old girl called Mitsuki heard all the discussion, unfortunately for her, she was the daughter of the King, she was not a normal girl, she was gifted with the spirit of the startshine Neko, giving her special abilities, and a tail, frightened, she started crying while she quickly runned to the door that led out of the castle, she turned invisible and got past the guards, she kept on running, and before she noticed, she was lost in Darkshine forest...
Nabiki´s story
Meanwhile, in another part of Darkshine forest, Nabiki, a 14 year old kitsune was wondering around happily with her fox pet, when she heard a shot, then another one, and another one, she started to run in the opposite direction of the shots, ahe knew that the kitsune hunting season has started, she ran desperatedly to a compilation of rocks in order to hide, but she saw a hunter aiming at her, `` put your hands on the ground now!!´´, and she did so, while the man appraoched at her, a vine entangled silently his body, and before he knew, he was completely paralized, nabiki started to run violently again, but before she even realized she was running to the other hunters position, a dart hit her, making her collapse...
Damijin´s story
While all that plot developed, a small plasma boy was running desperately from a 5 eyed crocodile-like monster, the boy had a black hammer as big as 3 times his size, he was a interdimentional being, he was made of black plasma inside his body, the only things that shone in the darkness of his body were his eyes, which seemed empty, they emmited a powerfull light from them, his name was Damijin, desperatedly, he quickly activated his jetpack and flew away from the monster, noticing another monster flying straight at him, he opened a dimentional portal with his hammer and teleported to lthe ground, avoiding the flying creature, but an elephant-like creature was rushing at him already, he tried to run left, watching at a hungry group of red furry balls with 3 eyes rolling in his direction, he was trapped by all those monsters, with nowhere else to go, only one solution was left, Damijin swung his hammer, hitting the ground, making a dimentional portal open, the portal made a dimentional typhoon and sucked him, the wormhole portal ended up in Conifers, a lycan and vampire planet, he saw he was standing in an spooky deserted plain, he looked around scared, but there was nothing but him and some trees, once he recovered from the shock, he murmured
`` this is not my lucky day ´´...
Nicks story
Back in the castle, the king, Alnork, had already buried his dead wifes body, and asked Fiona to create the dark cannons wich would be used to capture the people he talked about, at the same time, nick, a 13 year old boy was also ready, but not to make some cannons, but to make some mischief...
As king Alnork walked slowly to the magic chamber, nick sneaked to get there, as the king took the elevator, nick runned up the stairs, as the king opened the door of the magic chamber, nick opened a hidden trapdoor of the same, as the king walked to the black magic saloon, nick sneaked to the mana vault, once there, nick saw the wonderfull mana orb, wich retained all the mana inside it, nick also saw 5 wonderfull platinum wands emmiting and absorbing energy from the sphere, the wands had a hand as a top, and from one of the fingers of each wand a blue light shined, nick grabbed a wand to see it with more detail, but suddenly, the wand acted strangely, the blue light shone brighter, and brighter, 3 rings of blue light appeared in nicks right arm, where the wand was, and when the blue light caused an explosion of mana, Nick found himself in a jungle at the other side of the world...
- Title: The Kingdom of the Ant
- Artist: Nick Dabe
- Description: In this story, i will tell you about a group of individuals who are being captured by bounty hunters for the king, they must run to survive, or fight maybe, but the only thing we know, is that the hunt has begun...
- Date: 02/18/2009
- Tags: kingdom stories
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Comments (7 Comments)
- I Am xer - 02/21/2009
- That was great and i really liked the story
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- Nick Dabe - 02/21/2009
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well in chapter 2 youll see the ant cannons, and dont be inpacient, the ending will tell u all ( yes chapter 2 is on gaia alrdy )
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- darkangel9194 - 02/20/2009
- i agree with Alandra. things happen to fast but it is a good story.
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- Uber Alxandra - 02/18/2009
- nice story, but things happened too fast, maybe u should explain everything with more detail... by the other hand, the storyline is good, but i agree with insane, why is it the kingdom of the ant?
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- Insanedudex - 02/18/2009
- I just got one question... why is it the kingdom of the ant? why not the kingdom of another animal?
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- Insanedudex - 02/18/2009
- OMG this is awesome, i really liked the storyline and the intro of the characters, wow i envy your skill of writing, well anyways 5/5, my favorite characters were damijin and tommy, and the evil king of course, well bye!
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- Nick Dabe - 02/18/2009
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oh sorry, i forgot to edit that part, now its done, she died cuz the king cracked her skull making the shattered bones get incrusted in her brain... thanx for commenting and rating!!
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