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Chapter 6
One of the Devils came out of the group. he looked like the leader in a way. He wore black pants and a black jacket. his dark wings spread out wide. It was like he was the opisite as Rye. but much more beutiful. he had red hair and black eyes. he then said, "Well Rye it seems you got the little punks you wanted. hmmp. amitures."
"they are the best solders we have and can defeat you with out breaking a sweat, Kazi."
"No. I dont think so. especialy the angel with white hair."
this confused me. angel with white hair? thats when i realized it. my hair turned white when i was an angel like it turend black when i was a devil. that set me off. i clenched my fists and growled. my wings turned black and so did my long hair. Kazi seemd to be surprised by this. i heard him think 'perfect' suddenly Kazi was charging at me. before i could react he grabbed me by my waist and started to fly me away. my wings went in. i couldnt get them out. i was to afraid. i couldnt even scream. my friends had mad expresions on their faces and were starting to charge at kazi. then i blacked out.
- by Little Miss Zy |
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- | Submitted on 02/23/2009 |
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- Title: More Than This World ch. 3
- Artist: Little Miss Zy
- Description: same description as other chapters
- Date: 02/23/2009
- Tags: more than world
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shining Soul Forever - 03/01/2009
- make ur stories a little longer. But i love it! tell me when the next chapter is out.
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- Hero lV - 02/27/2009
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umm it's good but way too short. be more descriptive with your sentences and try to capture the reader's attention. other than that, bravo!! =)
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