- it was pretty cold outside but i didn't care. the exams where coming and i had only a DAY to get training. for those of u who are like "what the hell is this kid talking about." well let me gladly explain. im fourteen. i live with my mom and my dad dissapeared one day out of the clear blue. i got excepted into a training school called "Barons School for the TALENTED" well that school sure did only want special people in their school! my mom said that i could go because my dad used to go. well i went and thought it was a school for dorks or super smart kids. but i was thinking for a minute and said "why would i be going, im a straight C student with too many office referrals but i figured it might be a fancy school and my mom forced me. when i got to the train station the people all stared at me when i went to my train.the lady didn't look too interested but she put on a fake smile and said"what train are u boarding sir." "im boarding train 49." she looked at me then said "come inside my terminal please" she led me to a metallic looking door and said "go inside and ask for manous. he will guide you to your train" "but i thought the trains where up here? am i going on a subway or something?" i was about to question more but decided to leave her alone. i went inside and found out it as an elevator! i looked at the buttons and saw only two. UP and DOWN....how original can you get! i pressed down and the whole elevator pressed down fast and i mean fast!!!! i held on to the rail hoping i wouldn't barf all over the freaking place but i decided i needed to keep it in because the pressure would probably make it fly u then when the elevator stops it will fall down on me! finally after what felt like an hour,the elevator stopped and the doors opened.what i saw was amazing. there where thousands of people and ....and well i don't really know exactly but these umm creatures and other stuff. the people where ...well i gotta admit but they where muscular and kinda cool looking. they had big backpacks and all these kind of weapon sheaths like for guns and swords and im guessing for hunting i hope.i was too busy staring but a little guy that was blue i mean BLUE was standing in front of me."i need to get on da elevator so move yo *%$ and let me through. "whoa umm im sorry i didn't mean too..." "i don't care just move it!!!" gosh he was pushy! i decide to look for manous the train guide. i asked this guy in a uniform where manous is."manous that old kook well sure i can tell u where he is" "thank you mister.....umm" "my name is..." he pointed to a name card in his wallet he brought out. it said ...manous ."ooh your manous! im sorry for not asking who you are first. well sonny what do you need. a train schedule, a novelty baron school toy, or do u need to find out your train?" "my train please!!!" "well its this way just follow me!" i studied manous for a second . here were weird things about him. one his beard was extremely puffy,his monocle was umm shaded like sunglasses and he had a tail. yes let me repeat A TAIL. i was going to ask but i thought it was rude to ask about his ....disfigurement. he led me to a blue-green train that said "BARON" he led me on then a man in an old time British looking uniform asked manous "is he the last passenger Mr. manous sir?" "yes , give Mr.Hikari room 25 with Mr.Elban. make sure u get all his luggage safely packed into the luggage rack. that is all" manous went down the aisle to the conductor's room and when he turned to close the door he looked at me and held his thumbs up. as the attendant led me to my room i started to wonder how Manous new my last name. he probably knew it because he had a clipboard with my name on it or something.he led me to my room and i opened the door and i went into the room."thank you sir." " your welcome .now dont forget your bunking with Mr.elban so pick a bed and just chill man." i kinda wonder why he just went all hippie on me so i just decide to leave it at that.i went to the top bunk but theni saw a nasty sight. there where boogers all over the cealing and the bed was only a couple feet away. i climbed off and fell on the bottom bunk. the window had a nice view of the under ground station and i decided i was staying on the bottom bunk and i don't care what that elban kid as going to say i was staying on . then i noticed something hen i rolled over to grab my book. there was a huge double bladed black knife on the desk next to me. i jumped off my bunk then i i backed off to the door and bumped into something. i turned and saw a kid. he had spiky hair that was blond and he had a headband across his face . he had deep blue eyes that had a menacing look to it and in a way kinda scared me. he had a black shirt on that said "BITE ME" on it and he had ripped pants on that had holes all over it.he said "hey kid thats my bunk, and i dont want anyone touching my knife, jabber. dont mess with my stuff and i wont mess with your face. now get on the top bunk and say hi to boogerzilla for me." he pushed me aside and plopped on the bed and took out a game and turned it on. i wasn't about to get pushed arounded so i grabbed him by the shirt but before i could throw him he grabbed my arm and twisted it and pushed me back but it felt weird . it didn't feel like he even touched me. it felt like that feeling with magnets pushing back on same sides.i quickley grabbed his dagger but it moved with out anyone touching it and it went to him. we were about to fight but we heard a scream. he held out his hand and said "truce" i shaked it and went out side to see what happened..............
- by ArashiKunX |
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- | Submitted on 03/09/2009 |
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- Title: Shuriken Story part one
- Artist: ArashiKunX
- Description: a 14 year old boy named Ryan Hikari who dreams to be the best but one day gets seperated from his group and must survive and figure out what happened to his dad =B writers note- i will be posting the parts every week or so check on them if u like it plz
- Date: 03/09/2009
- Tags: shuriken story
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- ArashiKunX - 03/09/2009
- if you like it then tell your friends and tell them to pass it on and so on. enjoy my story
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- Aroused Nintendo - 03/09/2009
- love it!
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