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Samantha tried to follow the burnt trail Hinr left when running away. She eventually(AND I MEAN A LOOOONG TIME LATER)found Hinr sitting down and leaning against a tree trunk and his face was leaning down. She then realized Hinr wasn't sleeping, he was crying!! She sat down next to him and said,
"Don't worry, I understand you were really mad to have done something like that. Please don't cry." Hinr then threw himself into her arms, crying and sobbing and saying,
"I'M SO SORRY-Y-Y-Y-Y!! I'M....I'M....WAAAAAHHHH!!"
"It's okay Hinr, I understand..."
"I'm so sorry...I'm sorry....I'm sorry...."
"Hinr stop you don't need to cry you did it out of rage you didn't do it on purpose." Hinr then went back to leaning against the tree trunk and stopped crying. He then sniffed and coughed something black out. Then Samantha realized what was going on. There was smoke. And it was coming from their camp. A fire! Indians! Natives set a fire!
"I DIDN'T KNOW INDIANS STILL LIVED IN THE FOREST!! IT'S THE 23RD CENTURY RIGHT HERE!!!!"Hinr yelled.
"Well why are you screaming when you could be trying to help your dad!"said Samantha
"ARE YOU CRAZY? I CAN'T TURN INTO A PAIL, I TURN INTO A RHINO!"
"That's not what I meant"
"THEN WHAT DO YOU MEAN scream ??!!??"
"I mean this" Samantha then herself turned into a bobcat. She then told Hinr through thought-speech,
"Quick, turn into something that can fly and that It's BIG! You can turn into things in you own imagination Hinr, unlike I can. So stay here and in case I'm not back in 5 minutes, come get me and Roche."Hinr then nodded.
Samantha rushed into the fire, trying to find Roche. She then found him on the ground, sprawled, unconcious. Samantha tried to put him on her back, but the smoke made her turn back to human form, and also making her unconcious. The last thing she saw was a massive, golden figure swooping in.
- Title: Torment 3
- Artist: Mthieu7
- Description: This is the third episode of my soopah series "Torment". Keep reading folks, these just get better and more epic!Oh yeah and the Dad's name is Roche(Rock).
- Date: 03/10/2009
- Tags: torment
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Happiest_Dark_Neko - 03/22/2009
- although i have read this when it came out.... I want to comment on it.... it was good
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- Mthieu7 - 03/20/2009
- COMMENT PPL COMMENT.
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