Junoko Sa Fai

• Artist: Nazure Angel imp
• Description: This is a story of a girl called fai
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• Date: 04/25/2009
• Tags: junoko

In the forest there lived a little elf who always was sad she had
2 magic wands 1 was the white one of the crying horse the ot-
her is The Bloody War Wand Black and red The white one was
a power that no one coude destroy and it was named after it's
main power....But the girl was wild she always stood by the tree
of life that tree gave her life if she leaves Gaia She will die but she
said Trees don't work bythere selves there are real dragon fairies
But When the bloody Invasion started Annula And miko Where
invadeing gaia Fai the little elf who always was sad Killed her self
and let out a shriek that destroyed evil in all of gaia Once that happened
The great fairies Put her tomb in a forest...But thats only the beggining
Then she raised from the dead Evil was back soo she Combined her
wands to summon The White Dragon who had a evil heart and a
Noce heart then the dragon striked and andother Spirit animal
apeared Called the Quick Sand Horse Who let out a Lava of Quick
sand The evil elfs Chuckled and summoned The bloody dragon Of
Stillets but Fai is a legend Her wands are somewhere in the forest
the one who finds them will be history like Fai thats why her name
is Saint fai

Comments

[ChelsASaurr]

Skips~~

[vampgalforever]

wow...sorry but this needs a lot of work. this is more like an idea put into a handful of run on sentances.....

[darklove_zorg]

This isn't a story, it's a never-ending paragraph. You need grammar and puncuation and would benefit from a creative writing course, as well as the proper use of capitalization. I suggest you take up another hobby instead.

[Denied Silver Star]

You have run-on sentences...