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There once was a girl.
All alone in the world, she felt isolated.
She met a boy.
This boy sent her heart thundering in a flurry,
she'd sometimes think it was just going to burst out of her
chest.
The world wasn't so lonely, for she had the boy.
But some thing tragic happened.
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The boy left her.
Broke her heart with the simple
action of a text message.
'She was boring him'
His feeble excuse whipped her heart
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left horrible fleshy welts.
One night the girl decided to end her life.
She grabbed a kitchen knife and began to
-dot- an imaginary line for where to cut on her arm.
And so she did it.
All the memories of the boy flashed through her eyes
so quickly as her body began to go limp in the bathroom,
There went the time he gave her a white rose
When he first kissed her.
When he crooned her to sleep at night and cradled her near his chest.
When he left her with a simple text message.
Blackness over whelmed her vision.
That final memory topped it off.
She was gone.
Shortly after, the boy had come to explain how stupid he was
for turning her down.
He burst through the bathroom door on to find her limp body
slowly drowning into a tub overflowing with her blood.
A Girl
- by snickers105 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/05/2009 |
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- Title: A Girl
- Artist: snickers105
- Description: a short story about a girl
- Date: 05/05/2009
- Tags: girl shortstory death sadness boys
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MagiPuff - 03/29/2012
- This is good, although it is unlikely that her blood would over flow a bathtub, especially in a short amount of time.
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- StanleyWalters - 08/15/2010
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can i be honest?
it's quite sick and twisted.
i'm not sure i really like it, as i'm not into gore and that all depressing stuff. - Report As Spam