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In the 1930s in a dark alley in New York, a gangster named Johnny who was a mean and dangerous was harassing a nice hard working detective named Dan. Dan wouldn’t tell anyone about his cases. Johnny harassed him about a Burmese Falcon which was a bronze statue.
Every gangster was after this mysterious falcon. But Dan wouldn’t tell him anything, so Johnny shot him. Five years later….two people came out of no where. They were agents Brody and Lana. Now Brody was a handsome fellow, he was very nice to the ladies and Lana was a young and attractive lady and was so well built that all the men just couldn’t keep their paws off of her.
The reason why they were there was to help Eddie figure out who killed his brother Dan. Eddie was exactly like his brother. He wouldn’t tell about his cases. But Johnny and his fellow gangsters thought that they were after the falcon. So, they started to shoot at them, the two ran off into a clothing store. Johnny and his followers ran after. While the gangsters were looking, the two dressed in regular clothes, so they would fit in with the crowd.
Brody and Lana heard them coming so they went out the back window. They ran to Eddie’s office and told him that they were there to help find his brother’s killer. Just as they were talking to Eddie, he got a phone call from Johnny. He said that the two where after the falcon.
So Eddie got off the phone and drove them to an intersection and that’s when the breaks went out. The two new they were double crossed. So the gangsters took them to their secret hide out and tortured Brody, while Lana sat in the other room, where the henchman was watching her. Johnny was asking Brody were the falcon was but Brody said “I don’t know of any falcon”.
So Johnny whacked Brody over the head with a crowbar and asked again. Brody answered “I don’t know what it is or what it looks like”. So Johnny whacked him again with the crowbar. While in the other room Lana had gotten the idea of flirting with the henchmen that was watching her. So she talked to him, in just a few minutes he was gazing at her as if he were hypnotized. So she reached into his back pocket and took his gun and went to go help Brody.
When she got to the room she went over to Johnny and hit him and then he got mad. Then Eddie came in and said “what is going on”. Brody stepped forward and Johnny shot him. After that Johnny grabbed Lana and said “give me the falcon or I’ll break her neck”. As a result Lana said to Eddie “don’t give him the falcon”! But Eddie refused her and went to a picture that was hanging up on the wall and he took it off. Behind it was a safe that Eddie opened and in it was the Burmese falcon.
But Eddie didn’t give it to Johnny, instead he threw it to the ground and it was destroyed. Afterward, Eddie took out his gun and shot Johnny. Then Lana dialed the operator and got in touch with the hospital and got an ambulance for Brody. The next day Brody was ok, but only a flesh wound. That day Lana told Eddie that Johnny had killed his brother.
So now Eddie finally knew who had killed his brother and as for the other gangsters, they didn’t care or want the falcon considering Eddie destroyed it for a good purpose.
Chapter 2 Case#184A The Kidnapping Case
Brody and Lana were at the police station and one of the officers said “phone call for Brody and Lana on line two”. So they went to their office and answered their call. The call was from Detective Eddie. The call was about a kidnapping of a two year old girl. Eddie gave the descriptions of the girl. He said “she is 2ft 4in, blue eyes and brown hair. She’s wearing a tri-colored dress and tennis shoes”. Next, Eddie gave the descriptions of the Kidnapper. “The kidnapper is 6ft 9in, blond eyes and brown hair. He’s wearing a jogging suit and tennis shoes”.
“They were last seen on 24th street and that is where the kidnapping took place”. So, Brody and Lana got off the phone with Eddie, got in their car and drove away. They went to the gangster’s hide outs and asked for help. Now since the Burmese falcon case the gangsters asked Brody and Lana if they could help them with their cases.
That’s why their going to the hide outs. They rounded up the west side gangsters with five people in it, the East side gangsters with ten people in it, and the last group was the South side gangsters with fifteen people in it. The West side gangsters took the boarders, the East side gangsters took 24th street and intersecting streets and the South side gangsters took their cars and helped Brody and Lana look for the girl and the kidnapper.
So they spilt up into their places that they were assigned to. The time they split up was at 3:30 pm and they came back at 5:30 am and they were tired. The next night they went back out to their assigned places and they had no luck at all. It took them three months to look for the girl and the kidnapper. One day while South side gangsters, Brody, and Lana were looking for them, they saw a car swerving in front of them and they went beside it to see if it was them.
When they were beside the car they saw the girl in the tri-colored dress with her hands bound in rope and the kidnapper in a jogging suit. They actually found them this time. They surrounded him in a circle and arrested the kidnapper and took the two year old girl back to her family. The East, West, South side gangsters, Brody, and Lana all thought they did a great job and they were a successful group.
Chapter 3 Case#185A:The Murder of Taylor Hill
It was Halloween night and everyone was trick or treating and a twenty year old guy was stalking an eighteen year old girl named Taylor Hill. Taylor Hill had just graduated from high school and was looking forward to collage. She was an A+ student, got many awards and scholarships, and had extremely great friends that were always there for her. The twenty year old was Billy Cathcart. He had a dead end job, lived in a lousy apartment, and wasn’t a very good man.
Billy had been stalking Taylor for two years. He first saw her eating with her girlfriend at a sidewalk café, and he became obsessed with her beauty. Because he’s obsessed with her beauty he is unable to find the words to talk to her and to confront her. Taylor went to the park to rest on a bench. Billy followed her and creped up behind her, then got out his knife, and slit her throat. Then Billy ran off. Two teenagers walked by the bench and saw Taylor dead. By chance there was a police call box near by on a phone poll. One of them called and told the police that a girl was dead on the park bench.
Five minutes later, the police showed up with an ambulance and asked if they saw the murderer and the two girls said no. Unfortunately, Billy dropped the knife behind the bench. The officer told his partner to put it in a bag and find whose finger prints are on there. Now, Billy was in jail six times. So they already had his finger prints. They just needed to match them with the finger prints on the murder weapon.
Meanwhile, the police called the mortician and told him that the girl was Taylor Hill. So the mortician looked up the parent’s number and called them to come and identify the body. That night they came and identified the body and they said it was their daughter Taylor Hill. Back at the police station they had matched the finger prints. So they went to the detective’s office and said that they where Billy Cathcart’s finger prints.
So they went looking for him. Three hours later they found Billy walking and they told him to stop and put his hands in the air. But he refused and ran. So then they sped up and blocked him. They got out of their cars and arrested him. He had gone to court and was found guilty for murder in the first degree and the judge sentenced him to forty years in the State Prison.
- by Vasago110892 |
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- Title: Crissed Crossed and more cases
- Artist: Vasago110892
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- Date: 06/13/2009
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- carissa118 - 06/13/2009
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