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I watched her sway back and forth. My little goth angel. She moved inbetween the horny jocks that had come to the dance only to score a night of underage sexual indulgance. I of course was here for another reason. Her name was Amy, she had caught my interest the first day me and Dominic arrived in this small pathetic town. The humans here were disgusting, your avarage all-American backwood teens and parents. I realy dispise humans. Its hard to imagine i was one only 100 years prior to the incident i am mentioning to you. Dominic was the one who had turned me, showing me a world that i now love more than the most beautiful woman you could imagine.
He is my own personal god, my teacher, my father, brother, and my accomplice.
Amy glanced at me once, then blushed and turned around, showing off her tiny black skirt that every so often would give off a glimpse of a pink thong with fish net stockings that covered her legs. As i sat down in one of the rickety metal chairs on the side of the gym, i could feel myself get excited.
I may be a vampire but im still a guy. I sat with one leg over the other, my hands together on my knee. My silver hair covered one eye, the apparent fashion of the early nineties. The DJ was booming some Marilyn Manson song over the speakers. I didnt realy mind it, but it seemed he tried to hard to be an idol among young goth kids. I kind of longed to be a rock star myself, especially reading that cute little novel by Anne Rice.
I noticed Dominic standing by the exit door, arms crossed and leaning against the wall. He looked as if he was saying, "cant you just do your job so we can get out of here?"
I almost chuckled at the thought of it. It did sound like him, always trying to pull a quick "feed" and jet out of town before anyone notices. He had already finished on his meal. The young redhead was probably stuffed neatly in a dumpster behind the school. That was Dominic, always a sloppy eater. But for me, i took my time, indulged in the beauty of the hunt.
I waved slightly and stood up. Amy noticed me walking towards the floor and came towards me, she had taken the bait.
"Hey." She said cooly, but the sound of her heart beat was erratic and edgy.
"Hello." I replied.
"I havent seen you around the school, are you knew?"
"Yes, me and my brother Dominic just moved here yesterday, My name is Avary."
I took her hand up and kissed it in a gentlemen like manor.
"And who may you be?" I asked
She blushed and smiled a little. Her lip peircing wiggled as she spoke.
"Im Amy."
"Well then, Amy, would you care to dance?"
"Well, its kinda crowded and i need some air." She sighed.
She was setting a trap of her own. It looked as if she longed for physical attention. I pretended to fall for her trap.
"Hmmm, well, how about we go outside for some fresh air then?"
She smiled widely, exposing a row of perfectly white teeth. She grabbed my arm and led me towards the door, almost dragging me. I looked over at Dominic who was now sitting in the my old chair, smirking his well known smirk. Telling me how proud he was, telling me how evil I was becoming.
I ignored him and followed Amy out the door. We walked around the corner and stopped. Amy leaned up against the brick wall of the school and looked up at me.
"So, what do you want to do?" she asked, smiling an inviting smile.
"How about this?" I said as i gently brought my lips to hers.
She kissed back, harder. I felt her tongue force its way into my mouth. She wasnt just wanting a makeout session, this much was obvious.
I grabbed her hip and brought her closer, she reach around my waist inside of my black trench coat. I tried not to go to far before i fed on her, but i at least wanted to enjoy myself.
She rubbed my chest up under my shirt.
"Wait." I said calmly, I didnt want her to get me to excited.
"How about we just keep kissing?"
she pouted a little, but then reached up and kissed me again.
I began kissing her neck, readying my fangs. My blood began boiling with primal hunger as i began to embraced the need for her blood. I was so excited i couldnt bare it. My fangs attracted from my gum. As I began to place them on her thtoat, something happend. I couldn't do it. For some reason, my consious got in my way. I stopped and backed away. I was so awwed by this, I didnt realize that my fangs were out.
"Avary? what's... Oh my God!" she screamed.
She began to run, she ran all the way to the corner, then stopped.
Dominic had grabbed her by her throat.
"Damn it Avary, why are you so weak, I knew i shouldnt have let you go after a woman, there harder to feed on due to the sexual thrill we get from them."
He lectured, squeezign gently on Amy's throat, making her gasp for air.
I was ashamed, he was like a father to me, and to let a father down is the worst guilt for a son to bare.
"I'm sorry Dominic, Ill try harder next time." I said softly as i put my head down.
Dominic smiled gently as he put his hand on my shoulder.
"It's okay son, Im still proud of you."
I looked up at him and smiled.
"Thank you." i gratefully said.
Dominic held Amy out in front of me.
"Now, finnish your meal."
I looked at Amy, her eyes pleaded for me to let her go.
I looked away, i couldn't be distracted again. I quickly pierced her neck with my fangs. She screamed at first but then started moaning softly. Clear liquid began to run down her leg. You see, when a vampire bites a human, the human experiences something 6 times better than sex. Its almost like an instant climax. The only problem is, the human dies. But at least they die happy.
She soon went limp. Dead. I looked at Dominic. Even though she was dead, i still drank, i wanted to drain her.
"Your showing great greed, such avarice, wait that's it, your Knew name is, Avarice." He laughed.
I leaned up, discontinuing the drinking.
"I welcome it." I said seriously.
Dominic through her body aside and put his arm around me as we walked together into the night. I only looked back once, to see Amy's corpse lying on the ground, completely pale. She looked at peace. Somewhere inside me, I was glad.
We soon left that town, and went on to the next, and the next, searching for a meal. I never found another that effected me like Amy. I ponder it daily. I'm now heading towards the city, theres a disturbed concert and ive always wanted to go. As for Dominic, i killed him, I wanted to be the more powerfull one, and thats how it happened. I guess he was right when he said i was greedy, a true, Avarice.
- by Mr_A1ucard |
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- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: "The Dance: Birth of Avarice"
- Artist: Mr_A1ucard
- Description: This is a story that connects to my novel im currently writing. its about a young vampire named Avary who stalks a young girl at a high school dance. he poses as the new kid. This explains how he becomes evil, and how he gets his nickname "Avarice". Fans of vampire stories will enjoy this.
- Date: 06/16/2009
- Tags: dance birth avarice
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Comments (3 Comments)
- lilchickennuggett - 11/08/2009
- I lovee this!!! <3 :}}
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- Feline Wasabi - 06/20/2009
- Good read, a few errors here and there. But good none-the-less.
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- gabbwee2 - 06/17/2009
- it is pretty good, poor amy, he should have let her go.
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