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UNREAL
DAY 1
tab E Day had to be the worst day of my life, I saw my own brother die right in front of me. I dragged his lifeless body to the nearest medic I told the medic, “I’ll cover you I want you to take his body to the truck and lets get out of here.” As I was shooting at the other worldly enemy, the medic got shot in the leg, I had to choose my dead brother or the medic that was alive. I held the medic on my back while he was shooting behind me we got to the truck, I looked back and saw buildings crumble and bury my brother’s body.
tab We got back to the base and got the medic to the other medics so that they could fix up his leg and I learned his name his name was Zeek and he learned my name, Chase. I was awaiting my new orders, I had to go in and destroy the enemy hide out but I could not do it alone. My team had to be put together, “Chase, Zeek, and Gunz, you’re all on a team.” Gunz he was the guy who made fun of me the first day I got here, later we became friends. Zeek was the medic that I saved, now on my team, we left in the helicopter it got shot down and we crashed the pilots did not survive; we were in the mist of war three against hundreds.
tab “CRAP!” Zeek yelled.
“Come on we need cover… THAT BUILDING!” Gunz yelled while pointing to a building on the far left. We got into the building and started covering up the door then we heard loud foot steps we thought of the worst.
“OH HOLY SH…”
“Shut up Zeek.” I said
“Why?!?” He said back
“It can hear us.”
“Oh… sorry.”
We were walking toward the sound of crunching of who knows what then just as we got to it we saw this thing gobbling a human down, the worst of it, it saw us.
tab Its red eyes glaring at us, really that’s all we saw and a dead human but that’s beside the point. We started shooting at it but it had no effect, luckily we had Christine she was the Intel, she told us our mission and what we were facing. “Christine what the heck is that thing?” Zeek asked. “Scan it.” , “Got it!” Zeek said. “That is a shadow dweller…or a Rakak.” “How do we kill it?” “Get it in sun light, end transmission.”
It was almost nightfall, we started running and firing at it to get to follow us. We broke down every door that leads out side, we got out side we saw the creature, red eyes, black shadow almost flying up off it then fell, claws, teeth more then a sharks, and in side of its mouth green dark, dark green.
tab “Boo yeah!” Gunz exclaimed. It just exploded, its dark blood all over us, Zeek was flipping out Gunz didn’t care, and me I didn’t care ether. We ran inside and got to the safest place in the building, we started a fire to keep the Rakak away if there were any more. We took shifts one is awake the others sleeping Zeek was the first to be awake, me and then gunz. We made it through the night woken up by what was unreal.
- by Horizon Ave |
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- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Doomed war
- Artist: Horizon Ave
- Description: Please read and commnet, Unreal day 1 of the sad but yet suspenseful war story about Chase's log on what he's seen of this Doomed war. and now he, Gunz and Zeek have to destroy the other worldly enemy's hideout with the help of who he thinks that he's falling in love with Christine, She give them all they need to know.
- Date: 06/16/2009
- Tags: doomed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Mysterious Madness - 06/18/2009
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It's beautiful!!! ... ugh... I mean awesome and amazing!!!
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- Jake Lao - 06/18/2009
- Very nice love it.
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- supper_sexy_wolfgirl - 06/18/2009
- Nice job, i like wat you write razz
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