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One day while driving with my best friend, Kiki, the car stopped and our dads kicked us out of the car. We were very astonished at where it happened at. As we looked around we found ourselves in the middle of a sea on a bridge so long that you couldn't see the end of it. We sat there and wondered why they did it and why here? We are both very good kids that barely do anything wrong at all. It seemed as though they weren't even our dad's at all. "Why did they do that?'' said Kiki. I thought about it a moment then answered, ''I don't know. It was almost like they were being controlled. Well, whatever happened we aren't going to get anywhere standing in the middle of a bridge, are we?" She went silent for a moment then replied back,"No, we aren't. We should get going."
We walked for hours and hours until we noticed that the bridge was shaking. It started to crack and before we knew it there were tons of gaps in the part of the bridge ahead of us. "How are we going to get across now, Kathy?"moaned Kiki. I barely heard her though. I was too distracted in the two peices of bridge behind us. "Look,"I said. Kiki turned around and her jaw dropped open wide. Two bridge peices were rising in the air forming two scooter-like things. The only thing that was different from them was that the handles had little levers and buttons on them. "Sweet!"exclaimed Kiki. I,however, was speechless.
To be continued.....
- by Snowy Angel718 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: The Journey
- Artist: Snowy Angel718
- Description: One day two best friends were driving with their dad's when all of a sudden the car stopped and they were kicked out of the car. Now they find themselves out in the middle of nowhere in the middle of a sea on a long bridge. Will they find there way back home, or be stuck there forever? Read this awesome story of there adventure back home.
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: journey adventures cute exciting funny
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Comments (2 Comments)
- caytie458 - 06/28/2009
- Pretty good. it was interesting you should write more.
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- Sonata of the Damned - 06/21/2009
- It's pretty good. Write more. Comment back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101465079
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