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Chapter 1
We sat on the bed looking at each other.Football or Basketball?Such a hard decision!Kris said smiling.Well,we had better hurry.Which do you want to do?Football.Then football it is!He stood up.Come with me my love.He said trying to sound british.I laughed.Well,let's go.We disappeared out of my bedroom and began walking down the stairs.I had on a black dress.We were going to a football party.We were always at parties.We were the most popular couple in the school.I looked at him.Why do we aways go to parties?Well,I don't really know.Maybe we should ditch this one.We don't have,too.I said I had been anticipating this party for months and I knew that if I said I really wanted to go he'd take me.Please this one is special.Okay,sweetheart.He gently kissed me and we began walking again.We were a block away from the party.You want to race I challenged.Hmm.Sure.He smiled and we began running.I know teenagers running so childish to us we were still kids.We weren't eighteen yet.I was fifteen and he was sixteen.When were at the house I knocked.
Hello,part people.The guy who answered the door said.We are here to party.We stepped in.The music was loud and everyone was drinking.I never liked alchohal and almost left.Maybe we shouldn't be here.I thought.I grabbed Kris and began pulling him through the crowd.I got him in upstairs.
It is so loud down there.Yeah.He said his eyes gazing at the floor.What's wrong?It just I don't know.I think we should leave.I have a strange feeling.Uh.I have been waiting a very long time for this party.I was very upset.This party is going to be bad.You don't know that.I don't know why I was like that,but I stormed out of the room.I headed downstairs.Wait!He called I was already at the front door.I was leaving and now I foreverly regret it.
I stormed home and went to my bedroom.The biggest party of the year and I am missing it!I stood up and went to take a bath hoping to calm my nerves.
- by RockOnGirl12 |
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- | Submitted on 06/23/2009 |
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- Title: Silent Rose
- Artist: RockOnGirl12
- Description: Have you ever loved someone with your heart?Lacey did.Kris was her boyfriend and had been for years.One night though tradegy strikes leaving Lacey alone mourning Kris's death until his killer decides to come after her.
- Date: 06/23/2009
- Tags: silent roseromancelovedeathparty
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sweet Creamz - 06/24/2009
- they're right but this is an awsome story. uve got true talent
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- RockOnGirl12 - 06/23/2009
- I will take your comments and remember them for chapter 2
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- Dolly Akezai - 06/23/2009
- =/ very hard to read.Remember to put " " when someone is talking.2/5
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- SeleenRaven - 06/23/2009
- Its very choppy...and could you please seperate your sentences. Makes it very hard to read when they're not.
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