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tab Suddenly I was wrapped in warmth on my bed with Jake laying my blankets over me.
tab I laughed and pushed the covers away, grabbing Jake's wrist and pulling him down to lay beside me.
tab He had closed the window and the heater had come on. My radio was playing 'When your gone' by Avril Lavigne, the same song that had been playing when I woke up to Jake looking at me. I couldn't help but think about that night when ever I hear it....
tab I looked out the window, the moonless sky seemed both harsh and comforting, This was the scene of my dream. That phantom of a boy that comes to me every night in my dreams, my prince of darkness. I can always feel his arms, his kiss. His voice was kind and not to deep, but as light tenor. I lay down in my bed, trying to sleep so I could get up for school in the morning.
tab I fell asleep around ten, but my dream wasn't about my phantom. I was awakened by a rush of cold air and when I opened my eyes, above me, on his knees, hands on either side of my head, his blue-white-eyes watching me, he was there.
tab "Jake..." I said his name in a whisper.
tab "How do you know my name?" He asked in that beautiful voice.
tab I reached up and touched his face. "I have seen this moment in my dreams." I said.
tab With our warning, he kissed me, his soft lips caressing mine.
tab "You must be the one......" He said against my lips.
- by Seishin_Kage_25 |
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- | Submitted on 07/14/2009 |
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- Title: Shadow Storm part 5
- Artist: Seishin_Kage_25
- Description: Next part!!!
- Date: 07/14/2009
- Tags: shadow storm part
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Seishin_Kage_25 - 07/17/2009
- oops sorry...... I'll fix it, I must have been to much into the writing, I try really hard to not make mistakes......
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- Razzz25 - 07/17/2009
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Heared it?
Honestly?
Go read a grammar book why don't you? - Report As Spam
- soccerfangirl21 Deluxe - 07/16/2009
- This is the best piece of writing i ever read! No Lie. I cant stop reading it. Make More writings about this. 5! omg I love this story.
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- Seishin_Kage_25 - 07/15/2009
- This story is based on a real relation ship I had...... The song means a lot to me..... It plays a big part in the story and it is foreshadowing a big separation between the two......... Sorry if I give it away but It's just so you see why its is important......
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- Dreemz - 07/14/2009
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*facepalm* you've picked up a few negative trends from some Gaian roleplayers. I really don't like it when people say the name of the song that was playing. It's pointless, unless you're going to make some kind of reference to the actual song.
Decentt idea, but cliche. Decent writing.
4/5? I'm rating high - Report As Spam
- Phantomheart17 - 07/14/2009
- wow...you have to post more 5'd it.
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