death

• Artist: JONYGAT
• Description: this is what i think death would be like pls comment dont be rude
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: death

Death is The End of life.

Think of life like a movie and death is when the power surges and blows out the TV. Death is when the film gets so damaged that even if you were to get the electricity back on, the movie will never play again. Alive is only the memory, gone is the spark that made the movie play…or the person alive.

Life is too short and death is too long. You don’t have all the time in the world, so go out and enjoy life as much as you can. Life is like a beautiful flower…flowers fade; people you love either leave you or die. No matter who or what you love it will not last forever, it will come to an end, as all good things do. Death is your final wake up call. Wake up and live before he knocks on your door.

People take life for granted because they don't really believe in death.

by :jonathan chanhmany

Comments

[A Cow goes Meow]

First of all, if you dont want criticism, THEN DONT PUT YOUR IDEAS ONLINE.
Being a writer means you have to take criticism, and criticism can be rude. If you dont like it, dont bother putting your ideas online.

Second of all, NO DUH DEATH IS THE END OF LIFE.

Third of all, you see a spider, you or someone else goes "KILL IT"
What does kill mean? Oh, to end life! As in DEATH.
If you dont belive in death, then there is something wrong with you.
Anyways... 4/5

[x_lHoLLoWl_x]

i agreed with this post and I will never take life for granted 5/5

[cheazyniff339]

Its not bad, but could use more details. your doing good though. I give you a 3/5