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Hikari was standing at the bus stop, waiting for her bus. Geez. She thought. She looked at her watch. The bus was late, as usual, which meant she would be late for school,as usual. She leaned against a pole. This is the fourth time in a row!she sighed. What am I gonna tell mom?She smiled. Her mother probably wouldn't notice, being too caught up in other things. A beep came form her cellphone. It was her friend, Ai, wondering where she was. Bus hates me.she replied.
A gleam caught her eye. it was a gun. "Isn't that illegal?"she said. Suddenly, a hand grabbed it. Fearing the worst, she followed the hand. Luckily the gun wasn't pointed at her, but, it was pointed at the man in front of her.
"Bang." the person holding the gun said. the man who was shot slumped over,dead. Millions of thought ran through Hikari's mind. Who is this guy? Is he some sort of psycho? Am I next? Oh my god.Omigod. Scared, she turned and ran.
She turned back, which was a mistake. The shooter was chasing her. She opened her mouth to scream, but the man clamped his hand over her mouth.
"Listen." he said. "I know you're scared, but you must do exactly as I say, or I will have to kill you, and I don't want to do that." Hikari was confused. He can't be more than my age....she thought.
"Ok." She said.
"Good. Now follow me."
She followed him to a car. "Get in." he said. Just then, her phone rang. It was Ai. Oh my gawsh, what will I say to her?
"Give me the phone." the boy said.
Hikari reluctantly handed him the phone.
"What's your name?"he said.
"Hikari. Hikari Sato."
He answered her phone. "Helloooo? Oh yeah, she's not feeling well. She collapsed at the bus stop. Yeah. Uh, sure." He handed the phone to Hikari.
"Hello?"
"Hikari! Oh my god! Are you ok?"
"Yes."
"Who was the guy who saved you? Was he hot?"
"I don't know.
"I hope he was hot!!! I mean, like bishounen hot!!!"
"Ai-"
"Oh my god!! You have to tell me EVERYTHING!!
"Goodbye."
Hikari hung up as the car pulled up to a building.
"Well, we're here." the boy said. "Get out of my car."
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To be continued...... maybe.....
- by Rainbow Xylophones |
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- | Submitted on 07/23/2009 |
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- Title: Kuro (Part 1, First Encounter)
- Artist: Rainbow Xylophones
- Description: this is a better written (in my opinion), and slightly different version of my story, Z*. Enjoy!
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: kuro part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- queenalla14 - 09/09/2009
- OMG OMG i was like that the whole time while reading this when is part to comming out im your biggest fan
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- starlight vampire love - 07/26/2009
- I liked it! it was scarey. I wish you wrote more I really do.
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- Rainbow Xylophones - 07/23/2009
- No one likes it? sad
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