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''No, you cannot do!'' A person yelled in the darkness. A thunder struck in the background. ''But of course i can...'' Said the second figure. It seemed to glow slightly in the darkness of the room. The person screamed. ''Farewell'' The ghostly figure answered to the scream. The person run hopelessly around the dark room. The other figure laughed and threw itself at the woman. She let out a final scream. '"Rest. Not in peace'' The ghostly figure said laughing. All that was left of the woman was a big puddle of red liquid on the floor. That liquid was blood. Another thunder roared and flashed light into the room. The ghostly figure wasn't a person at all. What kind of human can be seen through?!
Alex read a newspaper in the back seat. His older sister drove. Her name was Emily and she was 18. Alex on the other hand only 14. He had great interest in mysteries. He saw an article about a mansion which was supposed to be hunted. no one located it. Over twenty people went missing. thats what it said. Alex laughed. Rain started to fall and few thunders roared far away. The car has stopped. '"Whats wrong, Emily?'' Alex has asked, ''No fuel.'' she replied, trying to restart the car. Alex looked out the window. There was a wooden, old mansion. ''Hey, sis. Look.'' he said pointing at the mansion. A light flickered in the windows. Like there wasn't electricity, but candles. Emily looked up. '"Lets check it out'' She said and took out an umbrella from under a her seat. She opened the door and than the umbrella. She got out and closed the door. '"Stay here.'' She told Alex. She walked towards the mansion. Alex saw her walk off. She knocked and teh door opened. She smiled and walked inside. Alex watched her. He looked at his watch. ''Nine-thirty Pm, Saturday, April twenty-third of tho-thousand and five'' He said reading everything possible off of it. He yawned and fell asleep.
Alex woke up. '"What time is it....'' He wondered looking at his watch. He has slept for two and a half hours! His sister still wasn't back> HE got out and walked towards the mansion. He knocked, but didn't get a reply. He pushed the handle and walked inside, since the door was opened. He walked further inside. ''What is this place?'' He asked himself. It didn't seem like anyone was there for at least a decade. ''Hello'' something said. Alex nervously turned around, seeing a figure, in the candle light. he stepped away. The wooden boards made a sound as he did. He saw something terrible. He could see through the person. He let out a short cream of terror. ''Welcome to the Ghostly Mansion'' The figure said with a wicked snicker.
- Title: Ghostly Mansion (Prologue)
- Artist: D3a7h_G0d
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Description:
A prologue to a ghost story!
I hope you all love it^^ - Date: 09/13/2009
- Tags: ghostly trip part
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Comments (4 Comments)
- I-heart-Persona - 03/28/2010
- Oooh, creepy! I likey! ;D
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- D3a7h_G0d - 09/13/2009
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okay
i will use that i part 2^^
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- DragonaScorpio - 09/13/2009
- It's really good but you might want to make it sound like sense and press enter when someones talking. Just makes it easier to read.
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