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Run, just keep running I kept saying to myself as i tripped and stumbled my way across the roof. A bullet whizzed past my left ear, I ducked my head as one of the men jumped out to grab me you know what happens if you dont they were gaining on me, I couldnt outrun these guys, let alone six of them.I was coming closer to the edge of the roof. I had two choices: face them, or jump.
My feet flew from the edge and I held out my arms in that short moment of free fall, maybe I'll actually die this time. well, lady luck wasn't on my side today. After a few seconds of unconsciousness, I felt my broken, bruised body lifted up by the cold hard hands of Marious, my own personal bodyguard (he mostly protected me from myself). " You shouldn't have done that Cressidia" he whispered Into my ear. I really hated that guy, hated him with a passion. Marious was my cousin, Mare's top 'employees', they were more like his secret police, but they were scary. Every member had absolutely no memory of their past lives from before they began working for him. Well thats was because they had been given some sort of chemical that wiped it away, then they were given what my cousin, Mare called an 'extreme makeover'. It mainly enhanced their abilities like strength, brains... you get the picture, and it didnt really help that afterwards they all look like friggin' supermodels. More robot than human if you ask me. Just slimy little puppets for whom they served. In this case Mare.
I began living with my cousin after my father was arrested eight years ago for murdering my mother, he didnt do it of course. Well his arrest just gave Mare another person to order around... well good luck with that.
- by deadly cats of death |
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- | Submitted on 09/14/2009 |
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- Title: ....cant think of a title
- Artist: deadly cats of death
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Well this is just the first bit of a story i'm writing. i'm noy really much of a writer so i wanted to know what people thaught of it ^ ^ COMMENT AND PROSPER!
oh, and if you have and idea for a title... yea - Date: 09/14/2009
- Tags: cant think title
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Perverti - 09/15/2009
- Wow, really really good. Love it actually. WRITE MORE AND SEND ME A LINK!!! I'd love to continue reading.
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- deadly cats of death - 09/14/2009
- yea, well i'l post the rest... and yea i'm not big on the punctuation... and yea she hit the ground, but it was grass soo.... yea
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- MarukawaBubbleGum - 09/14/2009
- wat a strange ending xD and this really sounds interesting!! you need work on the punctuation though. and did Cressidia hit the ground wen she jumped off the roof? id love to come up with the title if only i knew wat the whole story was about sweatdrop
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