- I am blind, my eyes are wet for the first time in a long time, is this the tears i haven't felt in a long time, or is it the blood Ive felt so many times. my body's falling, am I dying? i cant feel my arm, is it gone, why do I think it's wet? what is this heat, why is it close to my hip? what is the cold dead feeling in my other hand, why does it hurt so much? where are my ears why does it feel like im going to fly? my chest hurts from my right lung to my lower left hip. is it from death ripping my heart out my heart? Whats that sound I hear, is it a wolf? I feel something like a tail, i just know it hurts like it's on fire. why do I feel pressure on my legs? why does it hurt so much like my legs and feet have been bottled up for so many years? someone swings a swoed at me. i'm falling still, so he barely misses. I push myself up, he swings the sword again. i push my self up fast enough he only slices my arm. I run, he throws a katana at my back, it hits my back, almost shatters my spine. the adrenaline rush dulls the pain, i'm still running i make it to a tree, I start to climb. he throws another katana.this one almost severs my leg. I climb higher. I'm at the top, he starts to climb. I start to fall, my hip breaks. i pull myself up and i watch him start to climb down. I'm to scared to move. I fall to my knee. i manage to push myself up again. he throws another katana, this one severs my arm. I try to block it with my hand, it goes all the way through. I pull it out and try to throw it at him, he dodges, my blood is pouring, i'm pure white. he yells something I can't hear. I don't move at all.
- by Hells Brimstone |
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- | Submitted on 11/18/2009 |
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- Title: the injured swordsman
- Artist: Hells Brimstone
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Description:
it,s my English fiction assignment please rate by friday of next week because it's due then and I need someones opinion. Their are more parts im doing but I wont release them unless I get good ratings I guess.
P.S. if the ratings are good I might make more - Date: 11/18/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- goofyone - 11/22/2009
- personally...i don't get it at all...i don't understand the purpose of this story...over all, you have great writing skills...this story is just...a little weird...
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- WolfSpirit999 - 11/22/2009
- Uhhmmm...this is a school assignment??
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- bonescollector - 11/20/2009
- wow....greate story...
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- samurai blob xD - 11/20/2009
- wow very KEWL it rocks dude!
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- Raeliq - 11/19/2009
- Good Story :]
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