Eyes of the World

• Artist: ChristianPreacher
• Description: The biggest question on your mind will be whats happening next.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
• Date: 12/05/2009
• Tags: eyes world

Introduction
I was born January 1, 1993 at 12:00 a.m. The day that starts every year and the time that starts every day. They say I’ve always been normal but I’m not so sure they’re right. Sure I cried when I wanted something, smiled at every funny looking face and had all the attention in the world. Which my parents say I still do it just doesn’t work for me anymore. And I face the problems every teenager faces. But I must be different. Everything I see is as though I have the eyes of the world.








Ch One






Looking around I see nothing. Reaching out I feel nothing, no wall no object nothing that I can grab onto. Until I see a small light out of the corner of my eye moving in the opposite direction. “Wait!” I chase after it but it doesn’t take long for it to seem hopeless. I hear screams full of pain all around me but all I see is darkness. I trip. Falling I look up.

Comments

[Jim785]

ADD MORE DETAIL!Focus some more on the first part,why he has to be different.And Your Chapters need to be longer.Also, like I said before, add more detail!The first chapter needs more detail so it makes for an interesting read AND your chapters will be longer.